Krush (please approve)

Birth Name: Tri- Ald
Current Name: Krush
Race: Kryptonian
Age: 19
Sex: male
Height: 6'4
Weight: 200lbs (all muscle)
Eyes: Green
Hair: Brown

Weapon: None

Armor: His body as as hard as steel, however to many hits can hurt him greatly, and power shots are effective.

Skills: Super strong, endurable, and fast! Krush can lift up to 10 tons, resist many hits, and run up to speeds of 80mph. Other then these, Krush knows basic karate moves, and is very intelligent, making him hard to outsmart.

Magic: Krush can read peoples minds. This skill is very useful against his opponets as it prevents him from rushing into sticky situations. However if the opponet has a lot of will, this power will not work. Also Krush possessess Fire and Ice Rays. These will shoot out a beam of fire or Ice from krushes eyes.

Strengths: Litterally a living tank! Krush is strong, very endurable and fast! This makes him excellant in hand to hand combat. Also his fists can bust through wood, and can break bones if the opponet is not careful. His speed on the other hand makes him quick in close comabt, allowing him to dish out more hits, but at twice the energy cost.

Weakness: Kryptonite obviously, but other weaknessess are that he can only take so many hits before his super endurance wears off. About 20 hits repeatedely from the sword to be exact. His hits on the other hand require energy, so the harder the substance, the more power he requires to bust through objects. Though he may be fast, he is not very agilic, meaning he cant jump all over the room like a squirrel, he's more like a cheetah, fast but cant stop instantly. Also because he is a young Kryptonian, fire, explosives, and mind tricks greatly harm him. Also his ice and fire rays can only be shot out for about ten seconds max.

Personality: Generous, but can be mean. In battle he shows no mercy unless the opponet pleads for it, or if he knows the opponet will need it. He only kills if he has to, and doesnt like to fight for the heck of it.

Appearence: A tall well built person at first, however he is much more. He wears a black Long sleeve shirt that outlines his muscles, and he wears a black trench coat that he will throw off if the battle gets to hard. For his pants, Krush wears blue jeans, with black gualoashes, or boots with straps. Around his neck Krush wears the BA necklace, given to him by Kenjin, the necklace is in the shape of a sword amd glows a bright gold color.

Bio: At the age of 1 Krush was sent to be sent to Iridian, to live with his guardian. However when he was put in the portal yo be sent something awful happened. the portal malfunctioned and sent Krush far far away....

On a normal day, peasant man George Williams was sleeping, until a loud explsoion was heard. Geore ran out scared and found in his front lawn, a young child. Geaorge took pity on the boy and decided to raise him.

However when the boy turned two, something odd happened. he was able to run faster then a normal human, and lift at least 200lbs! Geaoge became frightened, and turned the boy over to the royal guards.

Young Tri-Ald stayed in his cell for 5 years, till he turned 7, then trouble began. Realizing the boy was now old enough to outsmart his guards, the king ordered for him to be executed.

The guillotine rasied high over Tri-Alds head, with a large crowd watching. Knowing the boy was to strong to be kept alive, the king oredered his guards to drop the blade. Amazingly the blade merely shattered against Tri-Alds neck. With a big bruise on his neck and a face full of tears, tri-Ald busted out of the machine, and ran off into the forbidden woods weaping.

He was later founded however by an old couple named Drake and Elizibeth. The two took Tri-Ald into there care. even learning of his abilitys, they still loved him. Drake being an old Karate trainee taught young Tri-Ald the basics.

However when Tri-Ald turned 14 the couple died of old age and once again Tri was alone. No one knows what everyone called him, but his true name is Tri-Ald and he goes under the name of Krush.

Krush then left teh woods and enetred the town once again. He learned of the legendary boy that broke the guillotine and ran off at speeds no human could catch, the townsfolk called him "Little Crusher", and the guillotine was preserved to show future generations.

Krush left the town happily and began to a new life however his guardians contacted him and told him of his fate. Krush was then left with a choice, go back to krypton to stay, or live at earth. Krush then told them his choice, and with a final farewell they gave him a new power.

That power....the ability to read minds! With a new power and new hope, Krush left and began a quest to test his power...

Heh, I'm afraid that with the new "not too powerful" rules in tact, Kryptonians are just too powerful in most cases. He seems fine overall, but it's his overwelming power that is bothering me. His weaknesses just aren't level with his power. Truth be told, a character has to be unbelievably powerful to beat a Kryptonian. And kryptonite, wow, it's hard to get a hold of that stuff (unless your surname is Luthor).

I'm afraid that you're just going to have to either lower his strengths or add some more serious weaknesses, as Kryptonite is the only big weakness up there. If you make him a little weaker, then later on you go through the evolution process.

I don't know wha else to tell you, but he's just too powerful.

Okay I edited it, if I add any more weaknessess he will be as weak as a normal human! I added everything I could think of, and I made the part up about being weak to fire and all that due to his age, but I was running out of Ideas!

I wanted a kryptonian to match my name as well.....

Heh, I'm still slightly reluctant to approve him. I will, but don't abuse his strengths.

*Approved*

Trust me, I never abuse anything....expept my gamecube when It doesnt work right, but thats another story, anyway thanx!