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Old 10-24-2005, 11:40 PM
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Renick

Name: Renick

Age: 21

Race: Human

Gender: Male

Hair: Long and Black with a silver streak running down the back of his head, starting at his
left eye.

Eyes: An Ice Blue that seems to freeze your mind when you stare straight into them.

weight: 198 lbs.

height: 6 feet, 7 inches.

weapon: Rithnaw: a Katana staff, blades jut out from both sides of the handle, and can split into two seperate Katanas.

Armor: He wears a set of chain-mail underneath his shirt.

Strengths: Speed, agility, and stealth.

Weaknesses: Magical attacks, elemental or otherwise. Himself, he's not completely mentally stable, and has tried to do-himself-in before. Love, he never really knows how to respond to such feelings since no one really showed any feelings like this towards him, nor has he shown any such feelings towards anyone else.

Skills/magic: He is well trained in the martial arts, and can decieve anyone whether his intent is good or evil. But it's usually for evil.

Appearance: His face is lean and thin, if you ever see it, and remains hidden beneath a black cowl, and a scarf that covers his mouth. His left and right eyes sport scars that run down his cheeks creating intricate little symbols that suggest he cut himself on purpose. He wears a black cape and tunic with long flowing sleeves that look like smoke blowing off him in the nightly wind. His pants, also black, are baggy and come down to the knee before being covered up by his boots. He wears a belt with pockets filled with supplies, and a hunters knife. Overall his appearance is mysterious, and menacing.

Personality: Angry, calm, he won't back down from a challenge should soeone be foolhardy enough to do so. He doesn't talk much and keeps to himself, never making friends, and never cares either. For down inside of him, he keeps his positive emotions, happyness, joy ect., bottled up and never indulges in them.

Biography: Was born and raised as an only child. His mother died during his birth, and his father never remarried. Renick had a hard life growing up, his father abused him, claiming he was the reason his wife died. Renick didn't like the way his father treated him. Who would? He often went out into the woods alone, just to get away from his father. Sometimes he would be gone for a few days, living off of the land, and learning important survival skills he would need later in life. But when he returned from these long treks, his father would only become angrier at Renick, and treat him even worse. Renick's father missed his wife terribly. He missed her so much that his sorrow kept him from enjoying life. Eventually Renick's father threw himself into the river, by Renick's suggestion.

Thirteen and parentless, Renick lived alone in a small cottage deep in the woods. He kept to himself most of the time, and went to the village near him only when he went to his job at the only restaraunt. The restaraunt was one of those nasty places where gangs and thieves hung out. His boss wans't much different from them either. Half of the time he was drunk, and would slap and beat Renick for doing miniscule things wrong. Renick tolerated it for five years, knowing that his boss wasn't in his right mind. But that didn't make it any easier to live with. One day, like any other day, Renick was walking down the hill to the village when he was kidnapped by a strange old man. The old man was a teacher of all forms of the martial arts, Karate, Kendo, Ninjitsu, everything. The old man wanted to train a successer before he died. And when he had seen Renick, he wanted to train him. Renick however did not succumb easily to his attacks though. The old man recieved many blows and only succeeded when he stabbed Renick in the side. Renick wanted to kill the man, he wanted to kill him even more than his boss. But seeing that he could learn much from him, Renick agreed to train under him. He was still allowed to go to his job everyday, so he could support the old man, and himself. But like Renick's boss, his teacher was angry, bitter, and a drunkard, whenever Renick did something wrong, he slapped him for it. Renick withstood it, waiting untill the time was right when he could finally kill him. And that day came sooner than Renick realized. The old man was pleased with how fast Renick learned everything, and decided that he would recieve a very fine gift when he was finished training. Six years passed, and when they ended, Renick was fully trained, and prepared to recieve the weapon that would set him free from his life of torent and abuse: Rithnaw, and be free for the rest of his life. When his teacher placed the blade in his hand, he reacted with the speed of the wind, and slayed his teacher. Later that day he scarred his face with a knife, as a sign that he would forever remain free of abuse, and any who dissobeyed that, would meet with a swift end. He was only Nineteen when he killed his master. Renick went on with his life though. However after so any years of abuse, he had come to hate people. His father, teacher, and boss were not the only to abuse him during his early years, but he was also picked on in school, and treated poorly in his job by the customers. This made Renicks hatred grow until it was past the point of shrinking. And so he remains alone, never wishing to be with anyone, or help anyone, unless he benefits from it. He does, however, still have good in him. He has tried to change his ways before, but did not have enough will. Even if he is full of bitterness, sorrow, and despair, he still has good in him. It's just waiting untill the day when Renick finally releases it.

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Old 10-30-2005, 09:11 PM
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Re: Renick

Hmm... where to start? The character is, overall, too powerfull. Weaknesses... look at the word and notice it's plural (more than one). I only see one weakness. And I'd say that you need to make the bio a little more... detailed, I guess is the word I want.
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Old 10-30-2005, 11:31 PM
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Re: Renick

Ok I edited it.
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Old 10-31-2005, 08:00 AM
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Much better. *Approved*
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Old 10-31-2005, 10:48 AM
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Re: Renick

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