Itana (third try)

Name: Itana
Age: 18
Sex: Female
Race: Human/Hylian
Hair: Short greenish-aqua hair, that goes down(like Kairi form Kingdom Hearts).
Eyes: Light Brown, with a tint of hazel
Weight: 112lbs.
Height: 5'8"

Weapon: The Staff of Silence allows Itana to perform spells.
Armor: The Bracelet of Telekinesis allows Itana to move her staff, or non-living objects in any direction, except for things her opponents wear or hold.

Strength: She is pretty good at running, jumping, strentgh, and swimming.
Weakness: Remove her staff from her, and she won't be able to perform spells anymore. After performing a powerful spell, it takes time for her to perform another one, this is also true with her healing ability.
Magic/Skills: Fire, Water, Wind, Earth, are the spells she can perform, but in the form of a ball, wave, or shield. She can also heal herself slightly, and finally, she can mix the spells together(i.e. fire+water).

Appearance: Young woman with tan skin, short pointy ears, and messy, short greenish-aqua hair. She wears a red/black plaid button-up shirt, that ties up at her belly, and with rolled up sleeves to her elbows. She has a black bandana around her forehead. She wears black pants, with a silver chain belt going around her waist a little loosely, and a necklace with a sapphire on the end. She wears a blue, light cloak over all of that.

Personality: She is aggresive, but only to strangers. She does that only to hide her identity, but if you get to know her she is soft and sensitive on the inside. She is so because she has been hurt so many times by her father and of his death, that she doesn't want you to really know her so she can be safe and not hurt again.

Bio: Itana was born into a 'family' of pirates. She was the daughter of the dread pirate known as the Cloud. Ever since she was born, she never knew who her mother was, cause she died at giving birth. Since she was small, she knew how to fight with the sword. When she turned 10, her father decide to raid a mysterious island in favor of his achievements. There, they discovered an ancient weapon known as the Staff of Silence. Her father, being as greedy as he was, kept for himself. Word spread about another dread pirate, who owned the legendary Demi-Weapons and everyone wanted them, including her father. One day, when Itara was 17, Itara snuck intot the ship's deck, and stole the staff form her father. During this act, her father's crew engaged with the other dread pirate's ship in battle. There were lots of casualities, including her father, and hardly anyone who survived, was badly injured. Both crews tried to retreat, but a fire broke loose and traveled to the gunpowder sector. As a result, a large explosion occured and those who survived, including Itana, were shiprecked and floated to an uncharted island. There, with her little strength left, tried to find shelter. She awoke the next morning with full strength, and searched the island for survivors. She found one by the name of Alk'zec, and discovered that she was the daughter of the dread pirate who her father attacked, and saw her holding the Staff of Silence. The girl gave it back and tried to be her friend, but they had a bad friendship for quite some time, but they learned to get along together after a while. Then after a year's hard work, Alk'zec and Itana worked together to build a small ship, and sailed off the island and returned to the famous Termina Bay, and tried to make a living there as merchants.

I'd like to see a weakness unrelated to the staff, and the 'Like Kairi' thing in describing the hair bugs me. Otherwise, good.