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Old 06-14-2005, 12:25 AM
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Saiberus

Name: Saiberus (sigh bur us)
Age:15
Race: Hylian
Gender: Male
Weight 140 lbs (muscle)
Height: 5'6
Eyes: Emerald Green
Hair: Dirty Blonde
Hometown: Dornsaw

Weapons: uses a regular sword, its straight bladed and the hilt is black with a sapphire in it. The blade length is 2'5 ft and the hilt is '5 in.

Armor: none

Magic/skills: He is possibly one of the best swordsmen for a boy his age and he is very quick, full of stamina and he can run 15 mph (normally). He has also had some training in spellcasting and knows how to shoot fireballs and how to increase his speed to 30 mph.

Strengths: He is rather strong for his age and can lift 300 lbs. Also he is resistent to mind tricks, poisens, and water attacks. Also he does well in swordfights and excellant if he fights a person with a staff, and because of his training in wizadry, he cannot be snuck up on.

weakness:He is not very agilic, so if he fights a person who jumps all over the place he'll have trouble inflicting damage. Finally he is very vulnerable to fire attacks and electricity attacks

Appearence: His hair style covers up his left eye and it goes back to the back of his neck. He wears a long black cape that covers up his chest and left shoulder and it has a hood but he doesnt wear it. Also he wears a blueish tunic along with white pants and black boots. He also wears a container belt to keep money, and other stuff in, and his sword/sheathe is attached to his belt.

Personality: Jack is rather curious and is often trying to better himself. He gets into trouble by getting into business thats none of his.Also in fights he tends to get carried away and trys to show off, usually causing him to get into a situation he cant get out of.


History: Saiberus was born in Dornsaw, a big fancy town. It was there he grew up with his mother Charllete and younger brother Taiberor. When he was eight years old he was cornered in an ally by older kids who tried to mug him. It was then he realized his skill with the sword. He grabbed an an old rod someone threw out and began to fight the thugs, they all fell before him like trees. As he still tried to recollect his thoughts a swordsmaster named Suirsiki said he saw the whole fight and believed he possessed true potential in becoming a swords master. Saiberus was then taken in by Suirsiki and trained in the art of the sword. But he was still puzzled as to how he had such skill already. It was then his mother told him that his father was a mage and that he had probaly inherited some magic from him, which caused him to do so well in the fight. By the time he was twelve he was most excellant with the sword, and then decided to practice with his magic. He soon realized he would have to leave town to study magic. So after saying goodbye to his friend and relatives, he sat out on his own. Now far from Dornsaw he met an old mage who knew his father, and told him he would be glad to teach him. It was only a few years until Saiberus knew how to create fireballs and increase his speed. He was soon to learn how to make lighting but Tadod the mage who taught him his spells had died of old age forcing him to stop at what he knew. He then returned to Dornsaw and told his mom and brother that he was leaving to become the best warrior and would not return soon , Before he left his mom gave him the cloak that he now wears and told him, that she would always remember him and wanted him to remember her. Before he left town Suirsiki gave him the Sword of Night and told him it was a sword given only to the most skilled of swords men. Saiberus then left to become a best warrior ever.
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Old 06-18-2005, 04:12 PM
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Re: Saiberus

Not quite accepted. The 'weakness to arrow attacks' needs to become more relavent to BA battles. How many BA battles are fought at long-range?

Also, 50mph is a BIT MUCH, especially since it's not even mentioned in strengths.

Finally, the personality is a little self-contradictory. How does he 'get into buisiness that's none of his' when he 'only talks if he's spoken to'?
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Old 06-18-2005, 04:39 PM
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Ok I edited it how does it look now?
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Old 06-18-2005, 05:22 PM
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Okay, that'll do.

Accepted.
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