Flame Tamer (please approve)

Name: Sattan de Loujer lll (But is called Flame Tamer)
Age: 100
Sex: Male
Race: Fire Demon
Hair: None, but has two huge horns on each side of his head
Eyes: Yellow
Skin: Crimson
Height: 7'1
Weight:300 lb (Mostly Muscle)
Homeland: Underworld
Rank:Elite demon warrior

Weapons: He uses a giant bladed sword, it is given only to the finest demon warriors. It has a red handle with a yellow gem at the end of its hilt the blade is black and about 5ft long.

Armor: Wears body armor which is resistent to arrows, spears, and other sharp objects.
Also he wears metal boots which are reseistent to heat, acids, or weapons.

Skills/Magic- He can manipulate fire (not create it) and knows how to handle a sword very well. To have fire to manipulate he keeps a a magic canteen on his belt that exels fire when opened so he has fire to use.

Strengths:In areas with lots of wood or in areas with lots of fire. his fire is more damaging. He is resitent to fire attacks, Is not hurt by lava, and is not harmed by weapons with no points ( such as staffs, nunchuka, fists) because of his thick muscles. Also he can lift 1 ton.

Weakness: Water, or water areas , or strong ice attacks. Also if he does not have his canteen and is in an an area with no fire he is more vulnerable. He is also very vulnurable to mind control, his horns are his weakpoint IF they are stabbed by a sword/dagger/spear etc. or if they are shot at by arrows, but it hurts for a sword or dagger.

Appearence: He is taller than a normal human or hylian, he's about the size of a 1 story house. has crimson red skin and yellow eyes. Also he wears black chest armor over rags of clothing, (poorly sewn clothes) he is also completley muscle. His muscles are hard as rocks but his skin is still succeptible by pointed weapons sword,dagger etc. 260 pounds make up his muscle while the other 40 pounds are his horns. his horns come out right above his ears and are the symbol that he's an elite demon warrior. He also wears metal boots that dont melt even in the hottest of lava (they were demon made).

Personality: Of many of the demon warriors in the underworld he is one of the only ones who will show mercy. He only shows mercy to a foe who put up a good fight but lost to him. He believes only the strongest will survive and dominate, thats why he only shows mercy to strong warriors. He has mostly evil in him but a slight bit of good in him too.

History: He was born from the flames (only fire demons are like that). He had no mother or father but was raised and taught in the demons training grounds. He was top in fire manipulation but dead last in fire creation. Of all the fire demons he's the only one who can't make fire. The headmaster who realized this gave him the canteen that made but a slight bit of fire emerge, any amount was enough for him to control.( the canteen is simalar to a lighter) After the acadmey relized he couldnt create flame he was removed from fire creation class and placed in fencing class. He was 7th place out of 200 demons in fencing class. By the time he was 50, He graduated and moved to a soldier in the demon class. He was upped to the rank captain after he burned a human city that kept causing trouble to the demons. He quit the military and became an elite demon warrior because satan lord of the demons saw promise in him. To this day he is an elite warrior at the age of 100. It is belived the reason he's not able to create fire is because he has some good in him and the rest of the demons at his school did not.

Expand on weapon and armor. I want to know just a bit more about this sword. It's giant yes, but how big is it exactly? How strong is his armor? Add things like this.

I also don't encourage the way you wrote the strengths. Places of specialty oaren't really something to put under strengths, but I'll leave it be, as long as it doesn't cause trouble later.

Fix it up.

Ok I edited it how does it look now?

Mm, yes, it seems ok.

*Approved*