The Minister of Extra-Terristal Affairs

Hope a science fiction based character will be excepted

Name: The Minister Of Extra-Terristal Affairs (Just the Minister for short), name given by adotive parents to embrassing to write down.
Age: 30 years since released from secert lab on moons far side.
Race: Human Bovine Hybrid
Sex: male
Hair: White and black
Eyes: Brown
Weight: 150kg
Height: about 2 metres at top of head, horns protrude another 10cm
Weapon: Twin energy pistols, constructed by Smith and Wesson, modified by the ministy. The left hand pistol fires explosive energy darts as secondary, right hand pistol fires stun blot as secondary. Primary on both high impact photon charge. Right handed pistol can be outfitted with sniper equipment (e.g. scope ect)
Armor: The minister wears a standard desgin shock armor vest. He also carries a small sheild generator that can only be used for thirty seconds before needing to be recharged. The sheild cannot with stand bladed weapons or high velocity weapons, only small arms fire.
Strengths: The minister is both physically fit and profiecent with most weaponary. He also keeps his horns sharpened just in case.
Weakness: The minister is quick to anger and blunders into situtations without thinking them through.
Skills: Basic hand to hand combat
Appearance: Most people who met the minister say he resembles a minator of legend, abeit comical because of his dairy cow colouring. The hands are the odd part, being hoof like but with the dexterity of a humans or as much as two fingers and one thumb will allow. His is always clothed in a blue trench coat and pants. His twin pistols are hidden inside the coats folds.
Personality: Very calm until the battle is joined (will even eat veggie burger in McDonalds despite his gentic background). He gets frustrated every time a clue to his existence is discovered. Hope he doesn't see red or the full force of his anger at the world and his creators is revealed.
Biography:
In the year 1930, after journey a century long, the Grey people came upon a small blue world in an uninteresting end of the galaxy. The scans looked right, at last lifeforms compatable with them. They could save their dying race from the infertility bought on by their own tampering. They began to collect samples of every living thing upon this planet, that they found out was called in the formal lanaguage, Terra. They continued to work secertly for another century. Although some incidents did arouse suspicions in the Land dwelling bipedal sentients, the humans.
In the Mid-90's they began to create the Hybrids, Half grey, half human they were to continue the civilastion of the greys for they were fertile and soon children were been born. The grey's and their hybrid children stayed near earth and continued to adjust and tweak ensuring the future.
Meanwhile humanity was ready to go to the stars. In 2150 using an engine design she had drawn on the back of a Napkin, Sarah Beane-Hughes-Crawford became the first to travell faster then the speed of light, in her ship Enterprise. The greys saw this and decided now was the time to stop hiding.
After a bumpy start with the question regarding probing and wether greys ever watched the X-files, the three races started to work as one and colonise the sol system and its nearest neighbours. All however was not well, in 2240 the first of the terrorist attacks from hybrid supmremacists came. The target was Tranquillity base the first place man had stepped on another world. The simple act of them sweeping away the foot prints of those men was enough to outrage the human community. Soon it became more violent and the Ministery of Extra-Terristal affairs was established to halt the terrorist activities.
They would also become an immigration conduit for the increasing number of xenoforms whishing to move to the sol system.
In 2290, The Minister was found in an aboanded moonbase of the greys, that the hybrid terrorists were using as a weapon cache. It seemed the terrorists had re-activated an old experiment. After been realise from his pod and being subject to a myriad of tests the Minister spent twenty years on Neptune station, the hub of incoming and out going space traffic. He spent his time learning, growing (at the time his vat was opened he was the size of a five year old child) and coming to terms with his existance, In the care of a human female and her Justene, an energy based sentience, companion who both used to work ofor the ministry. He also learnt respect to respect the many different sentients there were in the galaxy as Neptune station is often called the milkway in a microcosm.
But still the question of why he was created huants him. He joined the Ministry to seek anwsers but in the ten years since then he has only found red herrings.
It is now 2320, And the Minister doesn't realise it yet but he is one step away from shutting down the terrorist operations and learn the truth of his creation.

So is he okay to use or what?

Ok, first off, the strengths and weaknesses are good. But it would be better if you stretched them out a little. I'd like to explain more about them. If you have to, just make them larger strengths or weaknesses or add a new one for each. They're actually well done, but I just find them short.

Now, for skills, I want you to explain hand to hand combat. Are we talking martial arts? boxing? street fighting? wrestling? what? Explain what kind of hand to hand combat and perhaps how good he is at it.

I'm also having trouble with the name. You can't tell us his real name, but perhaps you could give him an AKA or a nickname. Just to save people the hassle of typing all that.

Fix that up please.

You will note in the name section it does say just the minister for short. The hand to hand combat is a handful of punches combined with some rudimentary throws, no kicks.

Strengths: The minister is both physically fit and profiecent with most weaponary. He also keeps his horns sharpened just in case. Due to his large size he often makes opponents nervous. When he keeps his cool he focuses on defense and will often try to talk things through.
Weakness: The minister is quick to anger and blunders into situtations without thinking them through. This leads him to be ignorant of circumstances and unaware of many threats. His large sizes does slow him down a bit. And his hoof like hands makes the proper use of knives a difficulty.

That better?

Yeah, just edit that into your original post and you're done.

*Appproved*

Thanks, now to find some one to fight.