Armor: a light black hooded cloak that can block certain kind’s magic attacks, anklets around both ankles that are suppose to bring her luck.
Strengths: Her quick speed can get her out of most messes and she can easily trick people with her speed as well, she can make up quick plans in her head to help her out in battles, her ice spells/ magic can be quite usefull to her in battle, her sword skills are pretty well for a self taught sword user and she can withstand most attacks with ease.
Weaknesses: Her main weaknesses are her oppisite elements which are fire and holy magics or anything related with them. Also those who are bigger in size can over power her and those who are stronger than her in strength are her weaknesses.
Skills/ magic: She can control ice at her own will (and has ice spells), fox fire, illusions, smoke screen, fast running speed (A bit faster than the guy with the bunny hood in OoT), and really high jumping.
Ice whip- All Shadow has to say is 'Ice whip' and a whip that is ice would appear in her hand. This whip is hard and cold, so it would hurt and freeze who ever it touches.
Ice shard dance- This attack maybe uncommon for Kage to use, but this is her ultimate ice attack. For this attack she slightly dances and says 'Ice shard dance'. After she says this she would thrust her hand in front of her. After so lots of ice shards would surround her opponent, cutting him / her to the death. And the ice shards happen to be very sharp as well.
Ice whisper- For this attack Kage would whisper 'Ice whisper' and then icicles would appear behind the opponent and strike at them.
Crescent ice- This is not an attack but a good spell to bring good luck to anyone she wants, even herself. For this she would draw a crescent moon on the ground and place two ice shards on the tips of the moon. She then would say 'Crescent ice' and with that she would think of someone in her head and that person would have good luck for as long as they need it.
Ice shards- One of Kage's common attacks. She takes an ordinary icicle and would say 'Ice shards' and throw the icicle at the enemy and the icicle would shatter into tiny but sharp shards. This attack stings when enemy takes the attack.
Ice blade- Another common attack for Kage. She just needs an icicle and sends her demon energy through it and says 'Ice blade'. Once that is done, but icicle and be long or short blade.
Ice thorns- A powerful and common attack for Kage. She takes out an icicle and says 'Ice thorns' and slams the icicle to the ground. After that thousands of icy thorns come out from the ground and up, stabbing the enemy in multiple places and whoever is around.
Miza jaktu (Ice shield) - Kage just says the spell, and the spell itself is self explanatory. Just after the spell is said, an icy shield is placed around Kage and the ice shield itself is stronger than normal ice.
Ice Path- A strange and helpful spell that Kage gained while training after a battle with a powerful snake demon. She would only say 'Ice path' and when she runs, ice will form while she runs, making her move/ run faster. Also her opponents can't walk on the ice that forms.
Fox fire- Used for to blind people (since it doesn’t burn things), and held create big and realistic illusions when combinded with a small object, though it only lastes for a short time.
Fox illusions- This is used to make illusions of herself to confuse the enenmy and it's every hard to see which one is the real one.
Smoke screen- Kage would whisper or call out ‘Smoke screen’ and smoke would cover the area she’s in so she could escape.
Healing snowflakes- A simple healing spell and the only healing spell Kage can perform. It's a simple spell since she only needs to say 'Healing snowflakes' and a swirling wind of snowflakes appear swirling around her then when the snowflakes vanish, all of her wounds are healed.
Blades of Blood- a normal demonic attack that most animal demons can use. It's a simple attack that is easy to use, the only things needed are claws and blood. Blood has to be on Kage's claws then she would say 'Blades of Blood' and swing her claws at the person she chooses and blades made up of blood would go to the enemy and it feels like blades if it hits the enemy.
Other- Since Kage is skilled with a sword she can do special things with her blade.
Personality: She mostly keeps her distance away from others because she’s shy to new people. When she’s not shy, she can be like a normal everyday fox. She’s sneaky, full of tricks and likes to play pranks on people and also very stubborn and short tempered. But for those who become friends with her, she can be nice, caring, funny and willing to do anything for them.
Appearance: Her silver hair goes down to her waist and so she normally keeps it up with a ribbon. She has silver fox ears with black tips, four silver fox tails with black tips, silver kitsune paws for her feet with black tips, small fangs and has claws. She’s quite slim for someone who isn’t human. And of course since she’s a kitsune, she has a kitsune form. When in her kitsune form, she looks like a normal fox but her fur is silver with black tips on her ears, tails, and paws (also has the four tails too).
She normally wears loose fitting clothing, well for the things she does. She has a loose long sleeved shirt that’s a light blue color and her pants are normal cotton black pants and since it’s loose on her, she has two white belts around her waist and bandages tied up at the ankles so she doesn’t trip.
History: Kage never had a really well experience growing up where she came from. Her icy homeland didn’t except who she was because she had a different look than everyone else. She didn’t have friends either when she was growing up, or she hardly knew her family because they where always too busy doing other things. When she ran away from home at the age of 8, she had many animal friends who helped her out with things that she needed help with and kept her companied. When she went into a new town that she never heard of, she was beaten up very badly from the brute demons that live in that area. Ever since she left that area, she’s has major scars from there that will always be bounded to her for the mistake she made of going into that town.
As she traveled with her fury friends for a few years going to different towns, a strange human sized ice fairy appeared before her and healed all of her scars and asked her how well of a fighter she was. When Kage told the ice fairy that was pretty good with a sword, she was put to a test: if she could beat a moblin with only her skills and a sword, she (the fairy) would give something good to her.
When Kage passed the test, the ice fairy was pleased to see someone who’s well with a sword from a fox who was also an ice demon without knowing. The fairy then awakened Kage’s ice demon blood as for the something good, and ever since then, Kage’s has had her powers and she was able to protect her fury friends from other animals and demons who wish to hurt them.
She still wonders around the world today, and with some of her fury friends gone, new ones have come long with her.
I hope this is alright and I hope it gets approved.... ^^;
Well, you're well on your way to getting Kage approved, however, I'm afraid I'll have to slow you down for just a second.
One thing before I start, her name says Kage, but many a time in other places, you call her Shadow. I will refer to her as Kage. Straighten that up please.
My first problem is her strengths and weaknesses. They're decent and well balenced, but I'm afraid that they're not detailed enough. I'd like you to explain how cunning and how quick Kage is. How much can she undure. I'd also like it if you could explain the weaknesses a bit more. Why are people that are bigger than her stronger, this is obvious, but it would be good to explain. You could also state why she is weak to holy magic. Please try and detail things like that.
Some of the things you wrote under Skills, should be under strengths, but it's ok. I would like you to elaborate on "Fox fire"s illusions and "Fox illusion". What do these moves do exactly, or what are they capable of doing.
Other than that, it seems good. Clear that up and we'll talk.