Chaos

Name: Chaos.

Age: 34.

Race: Human/Demon.

Gender: Male.

Hair: Black in human form but has none in demon form.

Eye Colour: Blue in human form, black in demon form.

Weight: 12 stone in human form, 15 stone in demon form.

Height: 6 ft 4 in human form, 7 ft in demon form.

Weapon: He has a sword that he uses in human form but when he changes forms, the sword also changes into a sword filled with dark power. He also uses his strength in demon form.

Armour: Chaos wears silver, light armour in human form but in demon form he wears no armour.

Strength: In demon form Chaos is incredibly strong and in human form he is very talented with his sword. Chaos is also swift in his movements with any weapon in human form.

Weakness: In demon form, Chaos is slower than in human form. He also uses a lot of energy to change forms and is very vanrable to attacks when changing forms. Chaos sometimes wishes for death as he has nothing to fight for. Because of this, sometimes he won't fight his enemies but merely beg them to kill him.

Skills/Magic Ability: Chaos can change from human form to demon form and back again at will. However, this uses a lot of energy and the more times he changes form in a battle, the weaker he becomes. Also, in demon form, he can use his demonic sword to fill his opponent’s soul with darkness, making them collapse to the floor.

Appearance: In human form, Chaos is a handsom man with black hair and blue eyes. He wears a scabbard on the side of his lrg and wears long black trousers and a black clouth shirt witch is covered by the silver armour.. He also wears a neckless around his neck so he will never forget his terrible deeds. In demon form, Chaos is all black with silver teeth. His hands are massive and he uses them to throw his enemies.

Personality: Chaos’ personality changes with his form. In human form he is a kind, gentle man who will step in the way of anything for his friends. In demon form he changes to a stubborn demon. Sometimes he hurts the ones he cares for because he can’t fully control himself. It takes a lot of will for him to turn back.

History: When he was a boy, Chaos was just like any normal child who liked running around and playing with his friends in his small village. However, on his 19th the village elder gave him the power to turn into an animal. Every member of his village was given the power to turn into the animal that suited them most on their 19th birthday. No one would know what the animal would be until after they first used there power. But on Chaos’ 19th birthday, he turned into a demon instead of an animal. No one knew why he turned into a demon but since he was so young, Chaos couldn’t control himself and he destroyed his whole village and didn’t turn back until the destruction had been completed. Only a few people survived Chaos' attack on the village and they have now sworn to get revenge by killing Chaos.

Now Chaos can controll himself when he changes forms but dosn't travel in demon form for two reasons:
1 It uses alot of energy.
2 If someone from his village saw him in demon form they would know it was him.
He now searches for something worth fighting and dieing for before he is tracked down by his foes and killed.

Seperate the text, please. Make it easier for me to read. And I'd like to know more about his history. Also, you could put down some more work on strenght and weakness.

I've edited it. Is it okay now?

Human weaknesses, please. And History, thank you.

Okay, how about now?

It'll do. Approved.