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Old 04-20-2005, 11:58 AM
RavenX United Kingdom RavenX is offline
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Name: Raven.

Age: 20.

Race: Human.

Sex: Male.

Hair: Short black hair about shoulder length.

Eyes: Blue.

Weight: 11 stone

Height: 6 ft

Weapon: Raven weilds a silver hilted, jewl incrusted sword with a 4 ft blade and a silver
longbow with hair from a unicorn as string.

Armour:Raven wears no armour, just his scabbard and quiver.

Strenghs: Having unicorn hair for string on his bow means Raven never misses his target. He's also a very skilled swordsman.

Weakness: Raven wears no armour and is vanrable in the sky.

Skills/Magic: Raven has the ability to grow wings from his sides but in doing so he grows weak.

Appearance: Raven wears long black trousers and a black clouth shirt. He has a handsom face that atracts many women. While traveling he prephers to wear a cloak so old enemys won't recognise him. He has large white wings with a span of 2m.

Personality: Raven isn't easily persuaded to let anyone travel with him as he dosn't like to put peoples lives at risk. However, if there is no other way, he will travel with a few other companions on his journey. He dosn't mind not being the strongest or the fastest warrior amongst a group, as long as people apreshiate his abilaties. Once in battle, Raven will not take off into the sky inless forced into doing so. He prefers to keep his feet on the ground and fight in hand-to-hand combat weather against a vilanous enemy or just practicing with his alies. Raven has a beautiful singing voice and likes to seranade his companions.

Biography: Raven was born in the small, quiet village of Mercia. As a boy, he wondered off away from his village deep into the surronding forest. Despite the efforts of his family and freinds that lived in the village, he was never found. Instead, he was raised by an old man that lived in the forest but never left it. He taught Raven how to grow wings from his sides and fly as high as he wanted. However, the gift was also a curse. Even though they were intended as a gift, growing the wings caused Raven emence pain so he tries to keep his feet on the ground. Once old enough, Raven left the forest and set out searching for whatever there was out there to be found.
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Old 04-25-2005, 02:51 AM
Erik France Erik is offline
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Re: Raven

Seems very good. You've got some spelling errors, and I'm a bit worried about that he never misses with the bow, but I suppose it's good as long as you don't over-do it. Also, the "lost his family and was taught by an old man is very, and I mean very, old. But, even so,


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