I thought of making my character a bit...better, more descriptive. Sorry it's in a different thread. I tried to edit, but everytime I try to edit, my computer freezes. I don't know why, but it does.
Well, anyway. Here it is:
Name: Xantez Narmios Age: 24 Race: Human Hair: Dark, navy blue. Spikey at the front, standing a bit up. Eyes: Dark slate greenish Weight: 152 lbs Height: 5" 9'
Weapons: 3 samurai blades (1 long one, and 2 shorter ones). 2 blasters holsted under his leather jacket. He also has a knife (12 inches) strapped to his waist, on the opposite side of where his swords are.
Armour: None (unless you count the leather jacket as leather armour).
Strengths: Can pilot a fighter jet very well. Can also fight at close range (with both swords, and hand to hand fighting). Is also very fast.
Weaknesses: Does not aim a gun so well (he has to take his time aiming), and is kind of a "Lady Hitter" (meaning he hits on women). Does not fight women (against his code of honour), and cannot stand big, huge, UGLY, monsters. To him, they just can't be tolerated.
Skills/Magic: Skills- Is a very well-trained fighter pilot, and can fight at close range, with or without weapons.
Magic- Has the ability to see everything in slow-motion, which gives him the advantage to dodge projectiles, and see lightning-fast objects. However, he cannot do this all the time. He can only do this when his mind is completely empty of everything, and only when he concentrates very well (he needs time though to do this).
He can also create a blast of light with all of his inner strength, called Light-Blast Kamikazee. He forms a symbol in the air in front of him, and light outlines the symbol. Once it becomes brighter, he fires it at the enemy by pushing forward with his hands. When the blast is closer to the enemy, Xantez charges through the blast, and attacks the enemy before the light hits him/her. However, he has to concentrate all of his energy. He usually goes into a trance to pull this off, and after doing this he has no energy within him left to do any sort of similar attack.
Personality: Is nice and generous. Always helps people in need, if they are in pain, in danger, or is attacked. Will never give in, even though he is almost at the time of death, and has no strength at all. Sometimes, however, he can lose his temper, and go berzerk (especially happens when a loved one is attacked or in danger). Aside from his positive side of his personality, Xantez is also sarcastic when he's either n a good or bad mood, and he hits on girls he thinks are, in his mind, "hot".
Appearance: Has a dark, black bandanna around his head. His swords are strapped to his left side of his waist, and his knife at his right. He wears a black, leather jacket (unzipped, down to his knees), which holds his blasters. He has a normal kind of build. He wears a black T-shirt, and his pants are greyish black, sports pants.
Bio:Xantez was born on March 23, 2214, on the planet Earth. His father, Sergent Mark Narmios, was part of the Federal Earth Forces (FEF). He was a respected man by his coleagues, and his General. As Xantez grew up, he looked up to his father, for he was his hero. At the age of 13, Xantez decided that he will become an FEF soldier when he finishes school. But his father had other plans for him.
"Why don't you want me to be an FEF soldier?" Xantez asked in confussion.
"Because you will make the biggest mistake of your life," his father told him. "I want you to be someone, Xantez. I want you to be someone important, like a doctor, or a lawyer."
"What do you mean that I'll make the biggest mistake of my life?" Xantez asked. "I want to be an FEF soldier, dad. I always wanted to be one."
"I just can't bear the thought of you going into war, son" his father told him. "Your mother can't even bear the thought of it, either."
"You always told me that I could be anyone I wanted to be when I grow up," Xantez said to his father. "I wanted to be an FEF soldier from the start. Why can't you except that?" Xantez then went to his room.
Xantez then had a grudge against his father. He never spoke to him, and always ignored him. But, after a few months from that, that was when IT happened...
The war against Earth and SR24T came, and His father was sent to destroy the hordes of fighter ships that were headed to Earth. Even though his mother was worried about him, Xantez knew that Mark would come back.
After the war ended, Earth came out as the winners, but a good friend of Xantez's father came to the residents of the Narmios family, and told the bad news...
Mark was holding off the hordes of ships, but he was chased after a seeker missile, and his ship was destroyed. After hearing this, Xantez was raged with anger in his heart and soul, and swore that he would avenge his father, in one way...or another.
After he turned 19, Xantez then went to join the FEF Academy, and fulfill his dream. He signed his registry forms, and started his training. He had trouble the first few weeks, but was stronger and more agile the rest of his days in training, especially in AirForce battles. After 5 years, he became a Sergent, and thought that it was time to set off on his quest to avenge his father. He took a ship, and went on his way.
After going through the artificial wormhole, Xantez found a planet, that looked like Earth (land, water, mountains, etc.). He thought that he should just fly by the planet, but his engines started failing, and he crashed onto the planet's surface. After the crash, he exited the ship, and looked around. Unfortunately, he only saw nothing but grass. But then a man walked past him. Xantez asked the man,
"Excuse me, but where am I?"
"We are all doomed," the man answered. "Hyrule will be consumed in darkness and shadow."
The man then left, and all Xantez found out was that the planet was called Hyrule. He travelled throughout the land, and found alot of great architects, well-known people (in Hyrule, of course), and after days of search around the planet, he found a small hut in a forest. A man came out, seeing Xantez standing in front of his hut. The man then asked,
"Who are you, young man? You do not look like you are from here."
"I am not," Xantez said. "I come from a different world called Earth. I have been searching other worlds to find and destroy a race, called Ragnars. They have once raged war against my world, and they have killed many. Including my father."
"I see," the man said. "How would you like to be taught the ways of the sword? It will come in good use on your journey."
It was not long until Xantez learned the ways of the sword. After 3 months, he learned how to wield a sword, and was taught how to fight with it. He was taught both 1 and 2 sword combat. At the small ceremony made by the teacher, he told Xantez,
"I am honoured to have been your teacher, Xantez."
"And so am I," Xantez replied. "I am honoured to have been taught by you."
The teacher handed Xantez his most strongest sword, and Xantez accepted it. After the ceremony, Xantez went on his journey, and his teacher wished him good luck.
Xantez reached his ship, but he found that it was destroyed. He checked the hyperdrive generator, and the hyperspace systems, and he saw that both were in good shape. Xantez had to fix the ship, but he knew he would have to find the items to fix his ship. He knew that he would be staying for a long time...
It's very close, but I would like you to add that extra description you were talking about. Also, you neglected to mention how tall he is. In your description you could also add what kind of build he has.