Seton

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Name:Seton

Age:12

Race:Human

Gender:Male

Hair:green

Eyes:blue

Weight:115lb

Height:4'11

Weapon/Armor:His weapon is a daggar,wears normal clothes

Skills/Magic:His skill is he can be faster than most people,and can jump high,but knows no magic.

Weakness:His weaknesses are due to having no armor,all atacks hurt him alot.Also,he has to go close ditances to fight.

Personality:Seton is always supportive of his teamates and.He also is sort of smart.

Appearance:Seton wears a black jacket with a green shirt.His pants are green.He has a scar on his left hand.He also always wears a hat with his hair visible out the sides.

History:Seton was an average boy living in the country of Warth.he was always looking up to his father as a great man.his father had always been teaching how to fight.Then one day,the day Seton got his daggar,his father was killed.Then Seton left Warth to find this murder.One day as he made his way through th galaxy,a man said he knew where the murder was.When Seton went to there,there was a sighn that read"Welcome to the dome.".He then knew he was there,and that he had to enter to avenge his fathers death.

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