Kane

Name:Kane
Age:24
Race:Hylian
Sex:Male
Hair:Short brown
Eyes:Golden Brown
Weight: 230 lbs
Height: 6' 5''

Weapon: 2 Katanas with Fire relics embedded into the handle so the blades could set on fire when ever he likes it to.
Armor: Light; light breast plate, shoulder plates.

Strengths: fire; magic
Weakness: same as any human
Skills/Magic: casting spells of fire and various other spells

Personality: Usally quiet when meeting new peaple, hot tempered easily annoied. often times brutal in battle. he has a good humor and excellent to get to know.
Appearance: He is 6' 5''. Caucasion; eyes get an outline of dark red when angry. preety muscular. preety normal features of a male.

History: has been searching for magical relics and items since he was 13 when he was thrown out of his house for burning it down with his first fire relic. since then he has been traveling all over the world as a mercinary fighting for peaple who pay him to while he searches for rare magical items. he wishes to settle down at some point with his true love from home. he has 2 brother and 3 sisters. he came from a lower classed farming family which fueled his want and need for power.

Hmm, I need a bit more detail on his magic, his weapons, and his history. Plus, try to think of a more original name, this is...if you got inspired by the WWE wrestler

Not bad...not bad at all. The only thing I think you should put more emphasis on is the history. For example, why has he been searching for these relics? Was there something that motivated him to take this path? Maybe a few ideas on what he would do on the jobs given to him from those that pay him for his mercenary skills.

EDIT: Damnit, Mirren...GET OUTTA MY WAY!!

Yeah, and just saying various casting spells leaves it too vague. A little emphasis on that as well wouldn't hurt.

Originally posted by Tenkawa
EDIT: Damnit, Mirren...GET OUTTA MY WAY!!

Hey man, whose the mod of this place? :razz:

...yeah I know I slacked off for a few days...>_>

Originally Posted by Mirren

Hey man, whose the mod of this place? :razz:

Don't remind me...even if I have been here longer than you.

I'm still the cooler one.

And I've noticed your slacking...we all have our off times. No big deal.

Kanes name is based off of my name(they sound the same) my real name is Dane. but if you want me to change that name theni will not argue. here is his new profile:


Name: Kane Thorin(goes by is last name- Thorin)
Age:24
Race:Human
Sex:Male
Hair:Short brown
Eyes:Golden Brown
Weight: 230 lbs
Height: 6' 5''

Weapon: 2 Katanas with Fire relics embedded into the handle so the blades could set on fire when ever he likes it to.
Armor: Light; light breast plate, shoulder plates.

Strengths: fire; magic
Weakness: same as any human
Skills/Magic: casting spells of fire such as a fire blast, fire tornadoe, fire wave, heat wave, Armageddon(a huge explosion miles wide). and other regular spells such as shimmer(makes an illusion of 4 of him), Transeformation(turns into a man sized dragon or pheonix) and barrier(blocks most magic attacks)

Personality: Usally quiet when meeting new peaple, hot tempered easily annoied. often times brutal in battle. he has a good humor and excellent to get to know.
Appearance: He is 6' 5''. Caucasion; eyes get an outline of dark red when angry. preety muscular. preety normal features of a male.

History: he has been searching for magical relics and items since he was 13 when he was thrown out of his house for burning it down with his first fire relic(items that strenghthen your power of fire most prominently found where large magicla communities lived). since then he has been traveling all over the world as a mercinary fighting for peaple(like wars, riots or even the more covert assasination) who pay him to while he searches for rare magical items. he wishes to settle down at some point with his true love from home, Amanda Nole. he has 2 brothers and 3 sisters. he came from a lower classed farming family which fueled his want and need for the fire relics. relics that he has been searching for to regain the honor of his family lost many years ago, when his great grandfather, the towns best knight, lost in a duel against the warrior that invaded his town, Sir Ulesses. Ulesses then owned the town and he enforced new unfair laws that made the town drop into a darkened age. For that reason the Thorin family was cast out of their home and were forced to live in a small poor village community. Now Kane(though he now goes by his last name Thorin) strives to regain his family's honor by defeating everyone of Ulesses's male family offspring in battle to prove that his family are still deserving to their honor.

Well even though I can't do this anymore I fell like showing you both up.

Approved, cause I'm the coolest exmod.

You can change it back to Kane if you want, I was just hoping you didn't copy it

Coolest mod Kishin? Hmm, funny, I don't see you on the mod list...but I see me :razz:

He said 'exmod,' Mirren.

And no, I'm the coolest mod. *Someone wispers something* What's that? I'm not a mod? Oh well...

Interesting little (6'5"...ok, big) character you have there, flashfire.

What the...?

That 'ex' wasn't there before!! Am I losing it!? Oh I'm taking a nap! >_>

Kishin's cooler than either of you anyway...and I know there's others who'd agree.

Heres a Pic of him for referance...