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Old 07-29-2012, 12:26 AM
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Alexandra Sabbos

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Old 07-29-2012, 01:32 AM
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Re: Alexandra Sabbos

I'll take this thread. The name amuses me. I'll post again soon, after I've read through it.
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Old 07-29-2012, 02:01 AM
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And here we go! (If I may ask though, how did you come up with the name Sabbos?)

Firstly, you don't need an Apparent Age when it is the same as th character's actual age.

Second, What is the "lightweight trinket" you mention in the Hair Style section? Note that I don't look at linked images of characters when approving (as you should be able to sufficiently describe what a character looks like without such imagery), so even if that picture showed it, you'll still need to describe it in words too.

In the Appearance section... A "celestial" nose? What does that mean?

What can the "healing potion" listed in the Carried Possessions section heal?


Once you've edited in these adjustments, I'd be happy to take another look.
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Old 07-29-2012, 02:11 AM
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Re: Alexandra Sabbos

I thought it sounded cool when I started out with "Sabrina" and tried to make it sound more Roman, eventually arriving at "Sabbos". I thought of your name afterwards but figured no one would notice, hahaha!

Ok, fixed the sections you described. (apparent age, trinket, potion)

A celestial nose is otherwise termed as a "turn-up" nose. It's a facial structure feature I thought important enough to add, and I'll change it if you like.
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Old 07-29-2012, 04:51 AM
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Sounds Greek (Or perhaps even further east) to me, but whatever. And of course I'd notice - I saw my name, after all. (For that matter, Alexandra is also Greek.)

Regarding the potion, is there just one dose in the bottle, or multiple? If somebody takes more or less than one dose, what effect does it have, if any? What degree of blood loss, muscle, tissue & skin damage would a single dose heal?
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Old 07-29-2012, 10:34 AM
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Re: Alexandra Sabbos

You're right, of course. I don't know what I was thinking.

Changed.
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Old 07-30-2012, 02:23 AM
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Looks good!

Sorry about the friend request though. Most people aren't like this, I realize, but I'm kinda picky in this kind of thing, and only accept the requests of people I know relatively well and am friends with. (I also prune the list every year or so of all the people I no longer am familiar with, with a few exceptions.)

EDIT: Oh yeah, and this guy's approved. Lemme go get my stamp...



Doesn't it look better with the penguin saying it too?
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Old 07-30-2012, 11:58 AM
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Re: Alexandra Sabbos

Yes! Thanks!

It's cool.

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