O.S.O.R.E.

NO LONGER IN USE!

Antagonist

Name: Experiment O.S.O.R.E.

Alias: Osoré (pronounced "Oh"-"So"-"Rey")

Age:
- As of Malformation: 100 Years Old
-From Natural Birth: 32 Years Old

Gender: Male

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-Gender note: he is still considered male even though he technically no longer possesses any gender-specific processes in his body.

Race: Formerly Shihaitan

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-Race Description: Osoré was formerly part of a race called Shihaitans but now no longer represents the race beyond a few cosmetic similarities, but function wise, ability wise, and in some ways visually, bares no resemblance. For Example he no longer holds the ability to manipulate matter like all Shihaitans are capable of doing. He now thinks of himself as nothing more than an awry mass of flesh, a horrible experiment broken loose.

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General Description:

Clothing: Osoré will usually be wearing a tattered black-cloth-cloak or robe which has almost faded into a gray color. It doesn't have very many distinguishing features on it besides a tribal symbol on the back, seemingly dyed red originally but has now been so used that the symbol itself almost looks scratched off . The cloak covers the majority of his body, it even has enough slack at the bottom to leave a trail of cloth behind him when he walks. In Public Osoré will always have his cloaks' hood over his face, under which a wooden mask slightly protrudes. The mask is carved to look very humanoid and shape-wise has two eye sockets, but only the left eye actually has a hole cut through the wood to see. It is painted with a light brown that is clearly over a white under-coat as the paint has chipped off over time. The mask has a few more tribal symbols around its eyes and down the bridge of its nose - all painted in a red color.

Appearance Under Cloak: because of Osorés ability he can take on many forms however he does have what could be considered his default form, a form that he has made for himself, found fitting to describe the monster he now is. In his "default" form, Osoré appears to be an ungodly creation, almost malformed beyond recognition of him being humanoid.

To start he has a strangely long arm length, to the point that he prefers to run on all fours similar to an ape, and they are both extremely bulky as though an apes as well, from the lower arm two bone plates protrude from about the wrist up to the flexing point at the elbow, acting as armor.

His torso is also shaped strangely, he has spikes growing out of his shoulder blades and down his spine - progressively getting smaller but coming of the tailbone and actually becoming a spinal tail. he has what appears to be a second pair of ribs protruding through the skin and they are much tighter together, almost making a chest plate, and his breast plate is layered thickly enough to not even have skin on it, instead having skin latch onto it from the sides for the pecks.

His legs are relatively small to the rest of his body and are shaped like those of most feral mammals, having an extended foot from the ankle and essentially walking on his toes all the time.

His face is far less symmetrical than the rest of his body: he only has one eye available for use, even when transformed he can only see from one eye as the other is usually stolen from people he kills, he uses it both as a prop for disguise and to see through other peoples eyes and gain the benefits that his Shihaitan eye does not possess. Just below the eyes he has extremely sharp rows of teeth, apparently a look adopted from carnivorous fish on his planet, he has 3 horns growing from the top of his right eye socket and then trailing on the side of his skull and finally spiraling and pointing forward, each one going further out and shorter than the last. The left side of his head beside the horns is relatively blank besides a very long and ridged-edged ear which comes from the side, he has an ear on the right side too but not as prominent and its underneath all of the horns.

On the center of his fore-head sprouts a curse mark in a calligraphic shape that appears burnt into his flesh and splits in five ways, two branches go further up his head and go towards the back of his skull (except on the right side where the horns get in the way) and two that go down, looping around the eyes from the outside, and the final one going down the bridge of his nose, the circle on the forehead from which the curse mark spreads has a symbol within it that means literally "nothing" a symbol composed of all negativity in the Shihaitan language.

There is no hair on his default form, nor is there any genitalia, naval, nipples, or anus, he doesn't even look like he was born naturally anymore, and when changing form these factors still hold which makes it possible to point him out from any person he may be disguising as. (unless they have the same appearance).

Skin: Osoré has retained the tan skin color that the Shihaitan race is known for (among other things). His skin color is capable of change when he morphs but he subconsciously has a want to maintain some part of his original body. In his default-form he has very rough skin, made even rougher as it gets towards the boney plates that protrude from his skin.

Eye: Osorés eye is always randomly changing color, one of the few parts of his form that he cannot change, another reason why even when in disguise he hides his face. He has noticed however that his eye color tends to change with his mood but maintains the eye color variation capable of Shihaitans (reds, oranges, yellows, sometimes grey or white color).

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-Eye Function:the function of his Shihaitan eye has remained intact since his malformation: Shihaitans are blind in the sense that they do not see by light reflecting off surfaces, they see matter itself and its compositions. This form of vision can be beneficial and a drawback. Beneficially Osoré is capable of seeing the matter and thus can spot faults in the formation of objects such as armor, and in some cases (depending on the density of objects) he can see through materials by focusing behind it while close up to the object itself, also because of his lack of dependence on light he can see in the dark. The Drawbacks are that he must also see gasses and other materials that are invisible to Human eyes, things like Oxygen can shroud his vision at times and in order to see passed them he must focus (just like with normal eyes but it takes almost twice as long to focus in this manner). Another drawback is that alot of forms of energy which can only really be seen with the light aspect of them are invisible to things like lightning, lasers, in some cases fire (where it is magical and is not using a source to burn from, like wood) etc are completely unnoticed. The flaw of his Shihaitan eye can usually be dismissed if he possess an eye stolen from a victim, obviously it depends on how the victim saw.

Height: in his default-form he is about 6 feet tall

Weight: in any form Osoré is in he will be extremely heavy, he is usually holding the weight of people he absorbs for nutrients, some of the person/people absorbed is/are burned off through the large energy consuming abilities of this monster. Because of the large but still varying amount of people absorbed he can weigh from about 400 lbs at his least up to about 2000 lbs at his max, he is an extremely dense being.

Other Sensory Descriptions:

Smell: when morphing his body in anyway, be it to take on disguise or to change his appendages into various weapons etc, he will generally smell like burning flesh because of the tension on his flesh and muscles when morphing around. Otherwise Osoré will smell what could be considered average.

Sound: an almost trademark sound to Osoré would be the revolting noise emitted when morphing, it would seem to the ear as if a mass of population where thrown into a crushing device, and then left to slowly be compressed, and as flesh collapsed and bones fractured the sound would echo.

Evocation: Osoré will almost always appear to be some monster from hell, having a dark and raging aura, a blood lust, and a powerful and eerie look on him. Even when disguised as another one cannot help but feel threatened by looking at him in the eye.

Pictures:

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Personality:

Psychological Status: basically he is insane, he is a sociopath for sure, he loves to kill, and he MUST kill in order to survive. He has a huge blood lust, he enjoys a good fight before consuming something, he toys with his victims.

Emotional Status: Osoré usually looks like he is happy but in a psychopathic manner, he has a creepy grin on his face most of time, almost as if he can't control it, he's just so happy to see flesh he can consume, even if being ripped apart or impaled this constant smile will most likely remain, he is usually too far into thoughts of killing to care. Pain is definitely there, it just won't show up on his face. This emotional state of being happy can be turned into a shark-like furry in an instant, when his life is clearly on the line or he becomes angered for whatever reason he goes absolutely berserk, relying on his body to do what it does, rather than let the brain 'interfere'.

Fears: Osoré fears himself, he still has a hidden humane side to him, but he also has contradicting feelings, he doesn't know if he is the monster within or the weakling Shihaitan who cries for help, either way it is a war constantly going on in his mind. His fear as a monster is to become humanoid once more, and his fear as a Shihaitan is to loose control of himself.
Along-side these fears is also of people who experiment on others, he feels a natural kinship with others who are being tested on by what he considers wicked people.

Virtue: if there are any virtues to speak of with Osoré it would be that he apparently feels sorry for those who are in the same general predicament as him, or someone who may become victim to the same problem. Beyond this he is mostly a beast. As a beast he has grown an expertise in using the wilderness to aid in his killing moves, because of this he has also grown a liking to some animals, though not all the time. When he hungers he must eat, and anything in the vicinity is game.

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Abilities:

Osoré has gained a new strain of abilities caused by his exile malformation, he can control the components of his own body and absorb other elements to be used although they usually are simply absorbed for energy in-order to survive. A list of his abilities work below:

General:

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-Morphation: Osoré can change the form of the structure of his body, using the materials within it and whatever he absorbs. His most useful ability when in public with this is to change into other people/beings , he can shape himself to any person/being he wishes but not without obvious flaws, in order to take on a proportional and almost exact identical form of something or someone he must absorb them. Other morphs later as well as limits to this ability.

-Absorption: Osoré can absorb materials into his body, adding onto his own being, the materials he can absorb are only those which are useful to the body: more organs, skin, muscles, bones, minerals, and many other things that can be used for energy or formation.

-Eye Theft: Osoré is known for stealing the eyes of people he kills in order to see in different manners, his Shihaitan eye is useful but has flaws, he fixes that problem by using different eyes to fill the void. He can fixate his optic nerves with another eye in order to see through them, sometimes it can take a few minutes for his brain to interpret the information properly and be able to see through the new eye efficiently.

Forms of Attack: Osorés attacking capabilities can be split up accordingly with sections of his body. His bones are most often used for sharp or sturdy weapons, his bones are about as strong as thick stones and contain a virtually nonexistent hollow point, his bones produce blood directly from the outside of the bone and to the muscles. Depending on how his bodies materials are used his bones can become as strong as steel.

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-Head: His head can be used as a weapon when he increases the size of the horns on the right side and rams, and he has a large bite strength, atleast enough to bite through a tree, definitely enough to bite through bone.

-Hands: His hands will usually be morphed into different types of weapons, using his bones to make the shape if required, if he absorbs proper materials he can make projectile weapons but melee weapons are far more common. common formations include:
-- Bone Sword: used for general slicing.
-- Bone Lance: used for general stabbing.
-- Bone Claws: used for tearing apart up close.
-- Muscle Whip: used as a ranged weapon, is edged with bones and easily can cause laceration.
-- Skin Pouch: used to collect people for absorption or to suffocate or crush people within.
some other less common but possible formations:
-- Basic Gun: long range attack but inaccurate usually, shaped of bone but uses other materials as projectiles such as rocks, needles, actual bullets and other similar sources to shoot at something up to about 50 feet away.
-- Explosive detachment: a mid range attack that obviously requires explosive materials and alot of heat, which is usually supplied by tons of friction between materials on Osorés body already. With this move Osoré detaches a limb, leaving it with the explosive materials, and allows it to explode, this is usually a last resort as he would need to absorb more organic life to grow another arm.

-Arms: His arms are capable of stretching a varying distance depending on how much organics he has consumed, he will usually be capable of atleast adding 10 feet to his arms without harm to his body. He will also usually cause the bones to become mostly cartilage-like, allowing his arms to become almost tentacle like, with this he will usually strangle, constrict, or otherwise bind people.

-Legs: His legs do not go through very dramatic changes beyond simply changing with the rest of the body, however it should be known that they are the most dense part of his body and hold a good amount of his power both just to hold up the rest of his dense body and to use as a weapon. His legs are dense and powerful enough to break through most stone or brick walls and has been able to put a dent in the toughest of metals if not break through them when given enough things to absorb.

-Spine: As strange as it sounds his spine is a weapon of sorts as well, it extends beyond a normal one into a tail. His spinal tail and spine both can form gruesome spikes, and the end of his spinal tail is often turned into a bladed weapon of some sort.

Forms of Defense:

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-Torso and Spine: Whenever Osoré requires a defense that covers his whole body he would use this form, it causes the protruding bone structures of his upper torso (the ribs and breast plate) and the spine to grow larger and surround the whole body, almost making a turtle shell look with it. This form of defense is his strongest, and one of his last resorts or used in a drastic case where explosives or extreme heat is involved.

-Extremities: Osoré can use the bone plating on his forearms and lower legs as a basic shield, and transform his hands into a shield of sorts for a slightly larger cover. His bone structure is pretty tough and could almost qualify for iron, it must be strong just to support his massively dense body, when using his bones as a defense he can block off projectile weapons and even some magics better than with his skin (which would take damage no matter at its highest level of toughness).

-Skin: Osorés skin is extremely tough because of the way its formed and because of the density, it might as well be some type of rock, the toughness of the skin varies due to how much material AND what kind of material is absorbed. Usually at its lowest level he can take weak slashes from a blade without much damage or even a cut to the skin. Its highest level of toughness still cannot take extremely fast attacks well, it usually toughens itself accordingly by impulse when seeing an oncoming attack, but unpredictable or fast attacks may not give it a chance to do so.

Limits:

General:

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-full body form without absorption: without absorption of the being he is taking the form of the body he creates will be skewed as well as other obvious malformations like his horns trying to protrude, and he will not have the extra eye usually needed to complete the disguise, and his Shihaitan eye is a clear screw up in the form. he can keep this very generic formation of a person so long as he has the organic components at his disposal, however he will have to burn off some of materials he uses for disguise for energy. he can usually keep this generic form up to a week without needing to get other materials to use for energy. These generic bodies are usually used to fit inside of his cloak and have a mostly normal shape, he needs to atleast disguise his feet and his arms slightly.

-full body form with absorption: even after absorbing the being he wishes to take the form of he will still have the flaw of having no naval, nipples, and other typical things to 'normal' beings that he usually doesn't possess. He is able to create a second iris skin over his Shihaitan eye to make it fit with the right eye that he'll also now have. Also the time limit on this form is much more strict as he can only get materials of that exact person once, he can usually only keep this form for a day or two before having to consume it for energy, if left for too long it isn't useful as a form or for nutrients.

-Morhpation Stability: the transformations of the body itself are quite quick, however they can take up to a minute to stabilize. If using a weapon form before its stabilized he can harm himself and the materials he's using to make the weapon can be more easily destroyed. If transforming into a different body and trying to move before it is stable he can destroy that form and damage himself. Also when morphing a basic bodily area he leaves the rest of his body much weaker than it usually is, more susceptible to attack (for example: if he puts alot of mass into his arms his lower half will become more susceptible)

Morph Size to Density Ratio: Osoré does not change weight when he changes form, this makes it impossible for him to become things such as avian species as he's far too heavy, and it's dangerous to be in unsteady trees as he could destroy the thing just by standing on it. Also when taking form of a being significantly smaller than his default form it becomes cumbersome to maintain the shape. For example if he turns into a dog, which are usually smaller than him, he must fatigue himself to hold the form. Similarly it is impossible for him to condense himself into creatures as small as insects or other bugs.

-Eye Theft: Osoré cannot keep the same stolen eye forever, at some point it begins to decay and instead of letting the nutrients go to waste he'll end up consuming it for energy before it becomes useless. Also as stated before it can take several minutes before his eye is fixated properly for him to see through it. Finally it should be known that using both his Shihaitan eye and a stolen eye at the same time will cause extreme headaches due to to much contradicting and different information being input through both his Shihaitan eye and the new one. The pain can almost cripple Osoré, this is thus avoided when he can and he will switch off between the eyes, never being able to see through both at the same time.

On Attack:
Osoré is held back by the materials that are in his body and whatever he can consume, and he must always keep a constant balance of what he needs for energy to survive and what to use for morphs. Using more as weapons than energy can cause him to literally begin to disintegrate.

On Defense:

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-Toughness of Skin: even the highest level of toughness on his skin cannot take extremely fast attacks well, it usually toughens itself accordingly by impulse when seeing an oncoming attack, but unpredictable or fast attacks may not give it a chance to do so.

-Density: Osoré becomes denser and tougher as he absorbs more material but becomes way slower, even with masses of muscles consumed he still is getting to weights that no normal being should have to deal with in such a relatively small body.

Physiological Extras:

Osoré can no longer sleep (for Shihaitans: commence with Shíentchúr) after his curse, he must instead constantly gain energy to stay alive, and along with having to use more energy to keep morphs stable or to begin a morph at all he must always keep in mind how much energy he has left. Usually in order to keep this off his mind he over consumes living beings and other materials in order to have a built supply of energy, this makes him slower obviously but he can change the density of his body and thus will look the same.
If Osoré decides to not overstock on energy and is down to his lesser weight of about 600lbs he can be very fast if he has consumed mostly muscle and has stored it in his legs, he can get up 25mph when running on all fours.

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Battle Strengths:

-Osoré is practically a tank, he is easy to get a blow on but really wont take much damage from it without someone taking advantage of his weaknesses.

-Although a brute most of the time he is also very sneaky, he has a cruel sense of humor in messing with other peoples minds, he likes to cause emotional despair however he can, and uses deception to a great extent.

-Not only can he take blows but he can deal them as well

Battle Weaknesses

-There is constantly stress on his body over the balance for energy and to morph

-He can sometimes become far too monstrous and looses touch of reality, he goes berserk and attacks on instinct, he becomes much faster reaction wise but also doesn't think much at all.

-Is often very slow because of the weight put on him

-Weak points appear in a large scale whenever he uses more of a certain part of his body for morphs. The body parts not used will become neglected and often not reinforced with the same amount of power or defense.

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History:

Osoré was never a peaceful person to begin with, he was a rare breed in the Shihaitan race, one who thirsted for war. As a young boy he used to hear stories of the Ancients and their mastery of every corner in the ways of manipulation, he was instantly fascinated, he only wished there were still battles to speak of so that he may join in on all the 'fun'. The already corrupt elders of the Shihaitan people clearly saw his obsession for battle and sent him on secret missions of domination across planets through the Adagael, he would come back with several new forms of technology that the Elders were interested in, and that were utilized by Osoré very often. In time these good times would pass as a potential threat would show itself.

A target named Aida was becoming increasingly more knowledgeable on matter manipulation, he wasn't even in the schools to be capable of learning, the assumption was that he was naturally gifted through some miraculous means. No matter how it was the target was learning so quickly, he would have to be eliminated. And so began the downfall of Osoré.

Walking casually through the streets and up a sandstone ramp to a door-way covered with drapes and beads, his weapons of choice at the ready, latched to his arm. He knocked on the stone of door-way and waited for the target to approach, but it was a woman, one who looked surprised by his wooden mask, he was clearly a suspicious looking fellow but that was his sense of fashion.

The woman called for her husband as Osoré asked for Aida, she obviously didn't think that the grown man would have anything to do with her son. A rather tall man with messy red hair looked at him, this mans eyes were trained much better than the female, he noticed the blade under the cloth almost immediately, Osoré would have to act quickly. The blade rose quickly stabbing the man in the chest, and then yanked out just as rapidly as it had entered, Osorés job was supposedly complete. He started to walk off casually to act as if nothing happened to outside the house, but the wifes screams echoed through the town as she collapsed to her husbands side, Osoré could only grin behind his mask as he now began to run from the scene of the crime.

Back at the house a young boy shed a single tear before running out the door and towards Osoré, under his bare feet sparks kicked up with every step, his fist seemed to glow as he jumped up and tackled Osoré. Tears fell on Osorés mask as fist flew towards his face, it wasn't strange for the boy to be upset, the events after this last punch would dramatically change his perspective though. A fist trailed by heat waves collided with the wooden mask and it spontaneously busted into a raging fire, Osoré immediately threw the boy off of him, threw down his mask and ran into hiding until it was safe to travel back to the elders. All the while waiting he pondered: who was that kid?

When Osoré finally arrived before the Elder Council he was greeted with faces of discontent, anger, disgust, and perhaps one felt pity for the punishment decided. He had killed the wrong person, the young boy was indeed the real target, Osoré couldn't help but wonder how that was possible. Before He could create an excuse an Elder grasped him by the skull, burning one eye with the palm and catching his hair ablaze, another hand came his way, this time with a sharp needle-like nail which carved into his head a symbol. The Elders explained that he meant nothing to them anymore and the mark on his head would now prove it in word and curse. The symbol turned black as if ink was pushing through the outermost layer of his skin, it then began to spread around his eyes and to the back of his skull, while this was going on nothing but screams of pain echoed in the room as Osorés body began to dis-configure, constantly break, melt and shift, and cycle through again and again. This was the punishment of killing any innocent Shihaitan.

The malformed chunk of flesh and bone was thrown into a cell and latched to the ground for now, until the next session when his body was reformed again....
Osoré would go through this hell several times until he could no longer reform into a proper body, he was at the end of his straw, the pain had driven him even further into insanity, and he almost began to enjoy the pain. The pain was all his day consisted of now, he might as well adapt and enjoy, but one other thought intruded on his delusion - revenge.

The plotting began, he began experimenting with his new hideous form, finding out just what it was capable of. After several abilities were founded in the nights passed, he thought of his great escape, his primary revenge and then his redemption. I will escape he told himself, I will kill the Elders he continued, and that little rats death will be my salvation! he claimed finally, he was sure all this was absolutely true, this was his reality.

The day finally came for his escape...
His body formed into a animal like form, large arms, small legs, bulky and bony torso with spikes abundant all over, horns grew from his lost right eye, and the ever changing left eye glared in anger at the guard just outside the cell. Many men stood up to the beast that was before them but it only lead to their imminent deaths, some where split in half by blades of bone, some where ripped apart by claws, and others where suffocated in flesh, but there where no bodies left to see. The absorbed bodies were clearly seen on the now massive Osoré, as he walked into the Council room with the elders he became more dense, returning to a 'normal' or atleast more fitting size. The Elders cursed, the monster was now loose! They would attempt to kill it themselves but each and everyone had their heads smothered by the skin from Osorés arm, which then filled with his own blood, drowning them all.

He had easily completed his first two tasks now, but was distracted in his boastful state, he wanted to extend the plot further, all the other mercenaries he had met with in his travels would be called to his home planet, and it would be destroyed, the people taken as slaves, and that one particular boy would be killed for all to see.

The fellow mercenaries where on there way but not before the annoying festivals began, Osoré hated seeing all the happy faces, he would attempt to ignore the world as he waited for its annihilation. It was a fault of his that he didn't know that his target, the boy Aida, was chosen by a Guide-Star during the festival and taken to the temple.

When the Mercenaries finally did land the boy was nowhere to be found, even in the now destroyed temple, Osoré seemed to be satisfactory with gaining profit from his own peoples' enslavement though. Too bad the Mercenaries no longer recognized him as a comrade now that he was a beast, he was nothing but a joke and a horror to them now.

Osoré had a new thought taking over his mind now: kill the mercenaries, kill the world, kill the universe! He hated the whole of existence, and he was far to selfish to just die, he would have to bring as much people as he could with him, he took the technology obtained through his missions of old and continued his long life simply destroying all he can.

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Fun Facts

Transportation: Osoré started off in the ship he obtained through adventures in the Adagael, he traveled through many planets since then, conquering them or destroying them the best he could, he brought legends of monsters to developing worlds and made the emotion of terror known to all he could. His mode of transportation has changed several times over the many years he has lived now, in some cases he has been forced to simply drift in space without a ship until he reached a planet.

Sleep: Osoré can no longer commence in Shíentchúr, the form of restoration used by Shihaitans, he is awake at all times of his life, he can only consume for more energy.

Emotions Through Eyes: it is often difficult to determine Osorés emotion because he always has his crazed sharp toothed smile on his face, however, the color of his Shihaitan eye is the best way to tell the tale. Yellow is his general eye color most of the time, meaning he is just...well... crazy. A more orange color is a more relaxed state, either that or he is running low on energy and he must consume more. Red is a color often reserved for his anger but is also seen sometimes as a general use and a mild set of pain. The grayer tones of his eye are used for less common emotions such as his own fear, extreme pain, shock etc. Finally the White eye color is used when he has completely lost any form of logic that he has left, he has become nothing more than a monster or a feral beast at this point, it is speculated that this state of emotion follows him feeling uncommon emotions and to counteract it he becomes animalistic and goes instinctual to cover such feelings.

The Name: O.S.O.R.E. was the name placed on a tag that labeled his as an experiment. It is a derogatory Shihaitan acronym that means something along the lines of "honorless-monster of failure" (if said nicely) it is far more offensive in the Shihaitan language. The name was made by the Elders as a name given to new found animals (somewhat like taxonomy for humans), that in itself was derogatory, comparing him to an animal and then giving an offensive name. He owned the name though, as he himself didn't feel deserving of a real name anymore, he realized what he was now.

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Themes:

The Horror: Two Steps from Hell - Photos in Darkness
Omen of the Monster: Two Steps from Hell - Clockmen
[I] The Beast Escapes: Two Steps From Hell - Iron Soul
On the Run: Two Steps From Hell - Crash
Chasing Prey: IFM - Prince of Darkness

okay, I've edited it and finished up all I could think of. This character is ready for approval whenever someone has the time ^_^. Note that if he gets approved relatively early I don't plan on really using him until a complete story is finished with my other character.

Originally Posted by Aida Shihai

-Appearance Under Cloak: because of Osorés ability he can take on many forms however he does have what could be considered his default form, a form that he has made for himself, found fitting to describe the monster he now is. In his "default" form, Osoré appears to be a monster now, almost malformed beyond recognition of him being humanoid. He has a strangely long arm length, to the point that he prefers to run on all fours similar to an ape, and they are both extremely bulky as though an apes as well, from the lower arm two bone plates protrude from about the wrist up to the flexing point at the elbow, acting as armor. His torso is shaped strangely, he has spikes growing out of his shoulder blades and down his spine - progressively getting smaller but coming of the tailbone and actually becoming a spinal tail. he has what appears to be a second pair of ribs protruding through the skin and they are much tighter together, almost making a chest plate, and his breast plate is layered thickly enough to not even have skin on it, instead having skin latch onto it from the sides for the pecks. His legs are relatively small to the rest of his body and are shaped like those of most feral mammals, having an extended foot from the ankle and essentially walking on his toes all the time. His face is far less symmetrical than the rest of his body: he only has one eye available for use, even when transformed he can only see from one eye as the other is usually stolen from people he kills, he uses it both as a prop for disguise and to see through other peoples eyes and gain the benefits that his Shihaitan eye does not possess. he has extremely sharp rows of teeth, apparently a look adopted from carnivorous fish on his planet, he has 3 horns growing from the top of his right eye socket and then trailing on the side of his skull and finally spiraling and pointing forward, each one going further out and shorter than the last. The left side of his head beside the horns is relatively blank besides a very long and ridged-edged ear which comes from the side, he has an ear on the right side too but not as prominent and its underneath all of the horns. On the center of his fore-head sprouts a curse mark in a calligraphic shape that appears burnt into his flesh and splits in five ways, two branches go further up his head and go towards the back of his skull (except on the right side where the horns get in the way) and two that go down, looping around the eyes from the outside, and the final one going down the bridge of his nose, the circle on the forehead from which the curse mark spreads has a symbol within it that means literally "nothing" a symbol composed of all negativity in the Shihaitan language. There is no hair on his default form, nor is there any genitalia, naval, nipples, or anus, he doesn't even look like he was born naturally anymore, and when changing form these factors still hold which makes it possible to point him out from any person he may be disguising as. (unless they have the same appearance).

Please split this up into more then one paragraph. As it is now it's really hard to read.


Other then that everything looks good to me. The character is a bit unorthadox, so I trust you wont abuse his considerable power.

Fix that huge wall'o'text and *APPROVED*

aye aye . and I wouldn't worry about me using his powers that much really, I hate being the god character anyway, I wanna focus more on this characters insanity