Old 01-11-2008, 07:31 PM   #1
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Altimaras generic training thread, Second assignment... (Faite)

Yea... Im better at describing my fights than anything else.... oh and Faite talks wierd for some reason in this one.....
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Faite was eating his food that highly reminded him of the slop criminals ate, only the criminals got better food. "Ugh... you in seat! Me crush you!"
Faite looked up to see a HUGE ogre lifting his club to crush him, and jumped clear of the seat.... and straight into a column. Dazed, Faite tossed a figureen into the air and called for Night, and while the huge brute looked up at the statuette, Faite pulled his Blade of Destruction and ran to the Orcs ankle and sliced in a high ark, only to find his blade bounced off.... and himself over ballanced. Then Night appeared, "Night, keep the thing destracted while I find a weakness!"

Night immediatly faced the brute, transformed into a tiger, and then pounced... only to be shrugged off. "Ha ha ha ha! Small man with big cat don't hurt Dag'zurath!" said the orc, as he prepared another swipe... this time at the column where Faite previously was.

"Dude! Calm down.... I didn't know honestly. I won't do it again!" , Faite said... this time across the room... and then noticed something about the orc... he was so tall he had to stoop in order to keep from hitting the ceiling.
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Then he noticed something else.... trolls were starting to get into the fight too... and then he knew one thing he could do. He could set them on fire and smoke the big brute out into smacking his head on the ceiling.... what if I get expelled though? I need to learn how to fight better! and decided against it... Faite then pulled his Blade of Healing out and ran at the trolls, only to be stopped by three goblins....



(im going to put these next parts into wide spaced sections... but still count the words...)

Goblin Battle
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Faite new he was in trouble... three on one? Talk about unfair.... but Faite knew that wouldn't be the problem soon... Faite ran at the center goblin and made such an easy overheaded attack that the goblin laughed as he parried it...only to find his blade pushed hgher by the sudden switch in direction as Faite flipped his blade and made forced it up so high that the goblin couldn't parry the follow up kick to the head.... knocking him out. Faite then faced the other two and unsheathed Night's fury, while sheathing the Blade of healing. "Now we can make this messy.. Or we can make this clean.... your choice."
The fire in Faites eyes was roaring now and both goblins knew that they were as good as dead... if he would let them die. Faite the ncharged in, kicking one in the face and using it's slumped body as a spring, jumping into the air and landing on a table, he turned to face the last.... which had already fled. Bastards... three on one and they still couldn't handle me!


Troll battle

Faite turned and ran to the trolls, all of which were the ugliest things Faite had seen since he had been in here... (and he had seen some UGLY things) "Come on ya ugly brutes come and get me!" And then he was knocked unconscious by a flying club.
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Old 01-13-2008, 04:13 PM   #2
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First off, the first lesson you're supposed to write is this, as detailed in the intro of my homeroom:
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Ahem, now then, when creating your training thread, please label it like this (minus the parenthesis):
[Altamira] (Type your character’s name here)’s Training

Your first assignment will be to tell how your character arrived at the Dome. Be creative! Make it 400 words minimum. If you're a transfer student, simply have your character be notified that they have a new teacher, but do not have them meet said teacher yet. For that, write 300 words minimum. (If you don't have MS Word and its word count tool to count your words, use this.)
And secondly, when doing the generic assignments, you must do them in order--meaning you do the first one before the second one (the ogre one you did.)

I'll grade what you've posted here after you've done your regular first assignment.
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