[Drewey]Zeik's training

The winged warrior soared through the almost endless canyon.He had been looking for a place to hone his kills,and he heard of an arena in the area which also had combat trainers.He got tired,so he glided down into a nearby cave.

Zeik looked around.The cave stunk of worms,the air was warm and damp,and there was a pile of ashes in front of him.Someone was here not too long ago...As he stared at the ashes,he noticed a few embers still glowing.When he swept the ashes away with his boots,Zeik found more embers which lit the cave a bit.That's when he saw a small opening just big enough for him to fit through by crawling.There were fresh handprints,too.

This enouraged Zeik to go deeper.

He crouched down to the same level as the opening and started through.When he did,he saw two glows not too far ahead.Most likely eyes.It didn't take long to figure out because not much farther ahead,the tunnel ended and the glows were just bat eyes at the end.Zeik crawled out of the hole,and into the large chamber awaiting him.

As soon as he got up,however,twofigures dropped down in front of him and drew weapons.
But it turned out that they were just some statues to surprise intruders.This was a problem.
They were blocking the path forward."This will be a total waste of ki..." Zeik thought aloud.He prepared the thunder fist,and smashed both of the statues into oblivion.Maybe I over did it.Oh well.

Zeik walked forward,and a voice called out to him."Those statues were worth quite the penny...He,he.Welcome,to the dome!"A torch lit up the room.

Well.

-There are spaces after all commas and periods. Fix all of them.
-'Most likely eyes.' is a fragment. Connect it to the last sentence with a comma or an elipse (...). There are some other fragments in there too--see if you can find them.
-Avoid being redundant. In one of the sentences, the last words were 'at the end'. Yet, earlier in the sentence you mentioned it was at the end already. Fix that.

I do like your attempt at description, very much. Though, it could use some improving. So, we're going to do a little exercise.

This will be tough, very very tough. Describe a room, any room, with no less than 175 words!