[Lio]Drago's Training

OoC: Uh... wow... that was alot of pointers... But anyways I am extremely happy about this new school!

BiC: Drago hopped out of the portal to find himself in the large cube. He had a puzzled look on his face as he walked over to a side of the cube. The dragon punched the cube as hard as he could but it had no effect. "Great! I'm trapped in a magic box!" He said cursing. Drago carefully took in his prison. After a while the winged lizard saw a jigsaw puzzle. He stared at it then walked over to it and poked it. Drago jumped back quickly waiting for something to happen.

Drago walked over to the puzzle and picked up two different pieces. He looked from one to the other. He noticed that they both had a side that seemed it would go together. Drago put the two pieces together and they fit. Pieces of human material for a challenge? Drago thought as he sat down ready to get to work.

The overlord started sorting out the pieces by what they looked like. He had five piles and begun to find their macthes. He found it fun and frustrating after awhile. He had some where around half of the puzzle done. He was starting to sweat from thinking so hard. Every time he got a wrong pair he swore loudly. He was about to collapse, but he figured out two pairs, which turned his boredom and frustration into courage and strength against the evil puzzle. Drago saw this as his greatist task yet. He was jumping with glee when he finished all but six pairs.

He was admiring his work and started to put in the rest of the pieces until there was one last space. He was smiling so broadly that his mouth looked HUGE. His teeth gleamed brightly in the light as he thought it was over. He grabbed for the final piece, but it wasn't there! The overlord swore so loud the cube shook. He searched around for it. He was freaking out, but he held on to his nerve. He searched and searched until he gave up. Drago was so tired from looking he was about to fall asleep until he felt something on his wing. He reached back and grabbed the object.

Drago jumped to his feet as he saw it was the last piece. "Finally I'm free from this prison!" Drago roared with pride as he stuck in the final piece.

The cube shook violently knocking Drago off his feet. He hit the ground hard and scrambled to his feet. He walked towards where a wall had been and rejoiced when he flet it no longer. He laughed to himself and thought of food. His stomach growled loudly as he set out into the Dome once more looking for food.

OoC: I hope that was better than last post!

Uh... is someone gonna come soon? Lioness where are you?

Ah, yes...sorry. >_> I haven't had much creativity lately, so this'll have to be an all OoC post.

You've definetly improved, which is good. Just keep practising what I've told you. Your post could've included more feeling of frustration and story of what happened from that. Description over all was lacking.

For your next assignment, I was Drago to find a cafeteria. It can look like anything you want it to, except there must be at least 2 other creatures there. You have to describe said creatures in a good way, so anyone that reads it knows what they look like. Have your character eat and then meet a domerii that will take him to Drago's own chambers where you rest up. Remember, paragraphs, punctuation and description.

OoC: Got it! But I'm busy for now so I'll post later.

OoC: I'm going to be away from school for awhile to see if I can get my old good writing skills back. I'll be out for at least a month but I'll be ALOT better so watch out!

Well, Lio resigned her position at the school, so I'm taking on her students. Let me know when you're back.

OoC: *Sigh* I'll miss Lioness... So what do I do now?