Battle #2: Link Messiah vs. Big Bro Davidia

Okay, well since the first battle seems to be going slowly, I am suspending it until after this match, which will hopefully give Andi and Sear more time.

*Walks back up to the stage.*

Are you two ready? Okay, Mess, you're heads, and BBD, you're tails.

*Flips coin, just like before.*

TAILS! BBD, choose which rapper will go first.

BBD: "Mess can go first..."

Okay, Mess, you are going first, good luck!

*Turns to face the DJ*

DJ, spin that *****!

alright, im checking in for me and bbd. erm... um..... I have till wed night to post mine at the latest. bbd has 2 days after my post.

Okay BBD Link Messiah has submitted his entry and will post it soon, so you have 2 days starting now to write your battle rap.

Good luck!

1) Yea Yea… I bet your rhymes’ll be bleh//
2) caPLAH~ my hand across your face, right then all your feelings are erased//
3) have you caught in a chase~ your losin is no court case~ add a beat wit my bass//
4) next rhyme I’ll add you in for a short piece of my time~ this battle, it shall be mine//
5) now.. your grime~ is the fact you try to help others~ big bro actin like their mothers
6) when ya rank is smothered no higher than my little brother’s!//
7) I shudder~ for your future, david-ia? I c you slowly fallin like the leanin tower of
8) peas a*/ I’ll cheat-ya~ outta winnin. How you ask? By leavin ya head spinnin~ mind
9) trippin~ eyes drippin~ im rippin you to shreds~ all you’re seein is red~ mind’s lost in
10) that head//
11) See I think the next battle will be better than this~ they can probably handle this~
12) reminisce when you’re runnin from me, tailed tucked back and piss//
13) Leavin a trail, don’t worry, I don’t mind if you bail, this is a fatal MESS your messin
14) with~ don’t bother wih your entry, you’ll trip…

GL BBD, and I no hard feelings both ways!

OOC~No hard feelings, nope :0) I'm sure glad I went 2nd, though. I would've had NO idea what to do. As it is...

(Quick note: Agin=Again, Dat/De/Detc=That/The/Thetc., ees=is, stuff like that. Gangsta enuff foe yuh?)

BIC~

1) Dough you be confusin' me,
2) Seems Dat you are loosin', see?

3) And on Dat day I urinate,
4) For you, my friend, twill be a drop too late.

5) Da battle ees here,
6) Da battle ees now.
7) You keep beatin' round da bush,
8) Like one of Ascius' cows.

9) I seen you tinkin' yous da Savior,
10) "All Holier dan Dou"
11) But up pops dis picture,
12) And...I'll just stop now.

13) Just remember dis quote,
14) And remember it well.
15) He who comes agin da Dave
16) Dat man ees headin' to ....

wohoho!, the voting goes as follows...
1) State who should win
2) Your favorite line/verse/thing in the battle
3) Why they win rather than the opponent.

That was good BBD, now lets get some voters please! oh btw, no PM advertising voting. U can bring up the battle in the chat, but don't encourage the votes toward one person obviously.

best out of 7 votes wins.
contestants of the tourny may not vote.

1) Link Messiah
2) now.. your grime~ is the fact you try to help others~ big bro actin like their mothers
quality...
3) The humor was more upfrontal in Link Messiah's lines and projected with a lot of beats but produced into a good steady ryheme. BBD's was good in the presentation,but it lacked the creativity that Link Messiah seemed to contain in his lyrics.

1) BBD
2)15) He who comes agin da Dave
16) Dat man ees headin' to ....
3) I liked Link Mess' better right up until that line. Link Mess seemed to have it all worked out and Dave's was a bit iffy but it payed off cause he was just leading up to IMO a great ending. Hard choice here but my vote goes to BBD. Good work both of ya!

1) link messiah
2)13) Leavin a trail, don’t worry, I don’t mind if you bail, this is a fatal MESS your messin
3) his was fast paiced, and the lyrics worked well. thats all i can say.

1)BBD
2) You keep beatin' round da bush,
Like one of Ascius' cows.
3)That was a fun rap and i lked it a lot...i didnt choosed Messiah because i couldn't get the rhyme of the song...

I guess I should cast my vote.
1) Link Messiah
2) 5) now.. your grime~ is the fact you try to help others~ big bro actin like their mothers
6) when ya rank is smothered no higher than my little brother’s!//
I found that funny for some reason.
3) Although it was less rythmic, it seemed to make a lot more syntaxical(is that a word?) sence. Plus, it was funnier I think.

1. Link Messiah
2. 4) next rhyme I’ll add you in for a short piece of my time~ this battle, it shall be mine//
3. I got in with the rythem on Link Messiah's. It all came together like a jigsaw puzzle.
4. I didn't quite get into BBD's rap, but it was still better then I could ever do. Good work guys!

1) Link Messiah
2)Levin a trail, don't worry, I don't mind if you bail, this is a fatal MESS your messin.
3) I could actually feel the rythym and could go with the song

o.o I can't vote... =( That's not cool...

haha.. well it has been 7 votes now... and this is a best out of 7 Kishin, thus the battle is over.. GG BBD!

Okay this battle is over, so I updated the standings and moved Mess up on the chart. Mods feel free to lock so other people don't vote a pointless vote or turn this into spam.

And it seems my game has been suspended ^^. Very well then, have a good match Kazan and Kishin ^^.

Congrats, Mess! ^_^ (and good job too, davidia, though other contestants couldn't vote.. ^^)

Locked.