Looking for trouble (any one person)

[No12]

OoC: Yep my first battle might be a bit crappy, there's a link in my sig for my character

BiC: Zak stood at the gate of the small desert town, all it had was bar, convenience store and few houses. Good was the thought that crossed Zak’s mind, the bar was all he looked for in a town apart from the gun store for ammo. He walked into the bar and sat at a moth eaten stool and got a beer. He sat, sipping his beer when an old man, at least in his late 80’s, spoke to him, “You look like warrior”
“I might be” Zak answered, taking another sip of the beer. “Well I heard there was another warrior near around here , a strong one to”
“Why would I want to know that” Zak drunk half the glass, suddenly getting interested in what the old man had to say. “Well you look like someone who likes to battle and cause trouble”
“You got that right” Zak emptied the glass, paid the bartender and thanked the old man for his advice. He left the bar looking for this warrior, not stronger than him he joked as his fingers touched the handle of one of his knives......

OoC: Sorry for the shortness

[WrittenHyrule55]

OoC: I couldn't find the link to your character's info, so for now I'm going to assume he's human. My character's info is here: Character List


BiC: Nafien had seen the man in the bar, drinking his beer as though he were drunk. He knew this man had been searching for something, or someone, and that he knew how to hold his liquor. He wasn't drunk, although the old man he had been speaking to had not seen it. A good ruse, although a dangerous one. This man didn't know who he was searching for, this "other warrior", and if the old man was speaking of Nafien, then this Zak fellow would not know he was being followed by the same warrior he thought he was hunting. The Guild would have its man tonight, Zak would be found, and Nafien would have one more victory, one more notch on the hilts of his scimitars. He stepped out of the bar, dropping his "cane", he no longer needed to keep up the illusion of his disability. He was blind, but he would not need his eyes to win. He never did.


OoC: Just to clear this up, I can't be discriptive on enviromental details like colors, and the way things look, because as you probably already figured out, my character is blind. But having a blind character lets me describe other things in great detail, such as sounds, smells, tastes, metal against metal in swordplay, ect ect. Just thought you should know. =D

[No12]

OoC: Click Zak in my sig it should link you to him if not try this one
BiC:
Zak walked across the tiny town he heard the bar door open and close but only just, his moved and he saw a man walking towards him. He turned and saw a flash on metal no two flash’s of metal the man was carrying swords. He faced the man and looked at his cold eyes, the cold grey eyes looking straight at him.
“What do you want?”
“You”
The way he said it the coldness of you sent a shiver down Zak’s spine he drew one of his knifes the same time as the man drew both of his swords. He also took one of the Glock’s and pointed as t his feet. He fired.
“Fine you want a battle; you are going to get one!”
OoC : You can start the actual fighting

[WrittenHyrule55]

OoC: Sorry if I've been taking a long time to reply, I've been super busy with a freshman theatre production, and haven't had much free time.

BiC: Nafien was startled by the gynshot, but had not shown his thoughts. Zak had made a critical error in firing off an unneccesary shot into the floorboards. It was meant to intimidate, but to a blind fighter, it only revealed the man's weapon. Nafien couldn't tell if he had another gun, or swords, but their movement and the sound of his equipment would tell him.
"How is it that humans can be so very ignorant?" Nafien mused, as he gripped the hilts of his scimitars. Nafien whispered the blades' incantation, and instantly, they roared to life. Now people were fleeing the bar in fear, they knew that there would be bloodshed.
Nafien swung across with the Hellkeeper, and as he expected, Zak ducked. Nafien then punched Zak in the jaw with the hilt of Sparkszan, and while the man was dazed, Nafien jumped up and vaulted off of his opponent's back. He made his way to the door, and slipped through, barely escaping the bullet that splintered the doorframe an inch from his head.

[WrittenHyrule55]

OoC: I also wanted to ask you about something, but I forgot in that last post. Anyway, I'm planning on archiving all of my writing here at ZU, and I need to know if you mind letting me put this story on my PC, for reference. You did start the thread, so I figured it's your story, not mine. Thanks.