Revenge of the Fallen Hero(anyone!)

OoC: Okay, so this is my first go at making a thread here so please bear with me! You don't have to ask permission to join this thread, so yeah. Here goes:

BiC: As he turned his back on the destruction he had caused, a chilling smile crept across Demyx's scarred face. He had long waited for this moment, and now that it had finally happened, he felt great pleasure. He sheathed his blade and laughed out loud. Soon he would have his revenge.

One of the iron-clad members Dark Alliance, who had somehow survived the attack on his base, stopped him in his tracks. The assasin produced a number of small, shuriken-like objects and threw them all at Demyx. The objects all stopped within a centimetre of Demyx's body. He narrowed his eyes and the objects flew through the air, back towards the guard, killing him swiftly and easily. Demyx scowled. He was itching for a fight, but these guards provided very little of a challenge. As his anger grew further, the flames behind him grew brighter and larger. He walked out of the city and twitched the fingers on his right hand in a peculiar way. The whole town was instantly ablaze, and he laughed again. He was headed for the next DA base, in the town of Sarized. He would destroy anyone who stood in his way, good or evil. However, he knew that nobody was that foolish. Nobody would dare stand in his way now. He would have his revenge.

OoC: Hope that's okay for a first try. If not, tell me and I'll make it better!

((dude, this is BA. This is for battles only. You should go to the crossroads for a story like this))

Pretty good

Originally Posted by Rantick

((dude, this is BA. This is for battles only. You should go to the crossroads for a story like this))

Oh ok ill re post it there... can someone delete this or something???