Gorgeous Death(librarian)

ooc: ok im trying to practice using Ywen. link in siggy. give me some critizism about my post, grammer, wording, descriptions etc. but not to much that it makes me feel like crap.

bic: Ywen sat drinking her water, in a bad mood after a job had went south. The tavern had barely any patrons, so it was a quit evening. She was just waiting for someone to even nudge her so she had an excuss to hit hurt someone. The job had been worth LOTS and was very angry. She was just about to sign the contract when another assasain came in and killed her contracter. She had escaped easily enough, but the money had been taken by the other assassain. She finished her water with a big gulp and got another, just waiting for it.