Every characters battle!(pure chaos)

Ooc: There's no point in having 18 characters if you're not going to use them, so might as well use them all together. Any one can join, and can use any number of characters, except they must all be approved/yours. I will use all my characters, and there is no limit to people who fight them. This will be a continous series of fights, to test all my characters, and my BA skills. When I run out of characters to fight with, you guys/girls win! This is sort of like cruel melee on SSBM, so enemies, have fun! Oh, you can't run away from a fight, and you can have up to three people on one side.

Bic: Everyone was having a fine day, until they vanished into thin air. A group of eighteen people appeared in a large field, and large pillars emerged from the ground, surrounding the eighteen people. The pillars made an impenetrable barrier, which held them inside of an arena. 17 of those eighteen people were pushed out of the arena, and were forced to see one fighter, Kodure, fight an almost eternal fight. Just then a voice came from no where saying:

"Warriors, your skills will be tested in this battle, and if you survive, you will be rewarded greatly." said the voice. "Here is your first challenger..."

Ooc: Have fun with the storyline people. Let the games begin!

OoC: ME FIRST! WOOT FUN! Ok I'll use Avardeen to give him some experience!

BiC:

Avardeen had been escorting a convoy to the Church in Torra just five seconds ago, but no longer. He stood in a large, bleak arena with grey, rock walls and brown dirt floor. It reminded him of an artificial imitation of genuine creation, but that didn't matter. He was being forced into battle now, something he never enjoyed, against a foe he'd never met, in an arena that looked and felt damp, dreary, and completely foreign.

Avardeen faced a small boy much shorter than himself, with his head ending somewhere around the middle of Avardeen's chest. The young man held a small sword and a wooden sheild, making Avardeen wonder why the boy was even here. He couldn't be much older than fourteen, making Avardeen a bit uncertain about his new opponent.

"This must be a dream," he mumbled, "or a joke."

Calling on his gods for aid, Avardeen unslung his hefty spear, Angels, and poised, ready for the battle.

Ooc: Um, Kodure has just a sword and shield, and he wears a tunic. I hope you edit that.

Bic: A person had appeared in the arena, and looked a bit confused. The loud and thunderous voice came again.

"If you two do not fight, then both of you will perish." said the voice.

Well, I do want to get out of here alive. thought Kodure.

He ran at his confused opponent, drawing his sword and sheild simotaneously.

The child ran toward Avardeen quickly and nimbly, drawing both his sword and shield in mid-run. Guess not, Avardeen thought, spinning out of the way quickly when the boy neared him and bringing his spear down heavily on the kid's upraised shield, but the boy didn't collapse as Avardeen would have thought. He stood upright and jabbed his small sword at Avardeen, who swing his spear down onto the tiny blade.

The young man's arm was propelled downward quickly, his blade embedding in the dirt floor.

Daniel...this is rather useless. There's no way you can use all 18 of your characters at once, without creating massive amounts of confusion. When we tell you that you need to actually use all of your characters, we mean in separate battles. Throwing them all into one battle at once is not satisfactorily using all of your characters. You need to develop them through multiple, separate battles.

Another thing, the quality of these posts is, to put it bluntly, lacking. This does not necessarily apply to Honorary Aussie. In the future, try to put more effort into your battle posts. A few lines of dialogue and maybe a skinny paragraph won't cut it. It's obvious that you don't take the time to think through your posts. And it's not just you that does this. There are SEVERAL BA members who don't think about the quality of what they're writing. Please, please, PLEASE try to put forth more effort.

With that being said, I believe a lock is in order. *locks*