Meeting at the ocean(anyone)

OOC:This is my first battle,so tell me if anythings wrong. My character is under character approval,Fisher. Or you could type in the faulty link on my signature. I can't get it to work.

BIC:"Dang!" Fisher hit the boat he was in. "I can't believe it broke down in the middle of nowhere! How am I going to get back to land?" He then heard a faint sound in the distance. Not knowing what to do,he screamed towards the direction the sound came from,hoping to not get in trouble.

OOC:1. Intro was kind of bland. 2. I'm using Salocin Just click on it.

BIC: Salocin wasn't sure why the strange man had come up to him and requested that the man Fisher to be eliminated. He didn't care. He would do this quickly and quietly while at sea. By the time when they found the body they would not know who had done this. He took The Shadow, his favorite bow, from his back, and knocked it. He rose it and aimed at the target being ready to feel the shot. Ready and waiiting for the perfect moment.

OOC:UH,that link does not go to your character. I would fix that soon.

BIC:When Fisher saw the figure on the boat,he was happy someone was there to save him. He just then noticed that the pearson was holding a weapon,he did not move. "Who are you?" asked Fisher. "It does not matter,as you will die soon. It is Salocin." Said Salocin. Just then Salocin released the arrow.Fisher dodged it,but fell into the ocean.he swam up to Salocin and tried to strike with his hook but missed. "You will have to try harder than that to defeat me!" said Salocin,getting another arrow to use.

"I don't think so," Salocin released the arrow but as soon as he did a huge wave of water rose in the way of the target.
"What the hell?" Salocin said as the wave started coming toward him. He had only a few seconds to dive into the water under the wave. It still juseled him around a little but he'd had worse. Now his opponent had the advantages.

"Hah!" said Fisher. "You were'nt expecting that,huh?".Suddenly,Fisher felt a pain in his left arm. "He got me!" said Fisher. He jumped back in the ocean looking for Salocin. He then thought why should I keep fighting? He then tried to escape,but was struck before he could escape. "I'm not letting you leave until I've finished you.." said Salocin.

Salocin was worried. He had the advantages on land but his opponents had them in the water. I think I'll try another time, he thought. He started swimming toward Fishers boat when he felt a pain in his arm unlike anything he had ever felt. He was being dragged toward Fisher! He wrenched the large hook from his arm and got in the boat. With his left arm he started paddleing.
"Come back here and fight," said Fisher but Salocin was to far away. Oh I will, Salocin thought,I will.

OOC:I thought we could fight some other time so watch for a thread by me Ace_at_zelda64 and our characters might meet again in that.