---A Battle of Ease---(Practice Battle)

Ok Dark Cloud, in this practice fight I'll be pointing out many things that are a main part of rpging. Tell me who you want to start the battle intro and I'll follow along. Good luck, Oh and I'll be using Zohik.

I will use Jaburo. i'll start the intro.



It was a dark and stormy night. The mountians were burning from the lightning that struck them continuesly. A dark shade passed through the shadows of a nearby village. As the people were in panic from the storm the shade was making quick work of the people. Striking right when the lightning blasted though the night sky. The crimson blood that was covering the streets wasn't noticed while the people ran in terror from the burning biuldings. The shade was the assassin Jaburo. As he slaughtered the village no one ever noticed untill only a few remained. Yet a figure rode in on a white horse. (hope you don't mind i added that part about Zohik). The figure riding was a man of hope named Zohik. He immediatly started escorting the people to a save cave. Yet he noticed the blood that covered the roads. He knew something was wrong but he couldn't afford to check it out. The remaining people were more important then to investigate the blood. for all he knew it could have been from the lightning that struck the innocent people of the village. After Zohik got everyone to the cave where they hid out the rest of the restless storm.
Jaburo had decided to allow the remaining people to live for now. He had a more pressing job to do. He had taken a contract from a rich man. as quickly made haste to take care of his target them the employer. As for the village he had assassinated. The remains had burnt to the ground and many lives were lost.
Zohik had made sure to personally escort the remaining citizens to a nearby mining camp and let the miners handle it from there. He decided to find out what else had hunted down those people. As he made his way to the village he came across Jaburo...


I have one reason for not adding a discreption for Zohik. I don't really know what he looks like yet.

It is very important to read a opponents character's profile so you know what you are battling. and when typing, when you aren't typing for the battle you put "Ooc:" meaning "Out Of Character:" and when you are typing about the battle you put "IC:" Meaning "In Character:." Here is the link to my character's profile...Zohik

He is around three quarters of the way down the page. Just look for a post from me.

well i didn't see anything about zohink jaust about that Sajuribo or how ever it's spelled. when i do find it, if ever, then do you want me to edit the first post?

Here is my character then -

Name: Zohik (Once known as "Odin")
Age: 28
Race: ElfHume (Half Elf - Half Human)
Sex: Male
Hair: Black
Eyes: blue (in battle flaming)
Wieght: 153
Hieght: 6'2"
Birth Date: Nov.10

Weapon: Hokiju (Meanings "The Taker and Protecter of Life") This sword is a Legend to all Elfs as it is held by Zohik, no one else may touch the sword with their flesh willingly or it will go against it's using gaining its own energy.
Armor: Normal White Gi. Mostly he never has a armor top. He usually doesn't have a top on for it provides less movement speed.

Strengths: Speed, Endurance, Balance, Death, and Stractics.
Weaknesses: Wind, Black Magic, and Style of fighting.

Techniques:
(Scale Break) - Series of slashes that will disarm the opponent's arms.

(Ziton)energy sword - Gives his sword a energy pattern of its own. It can guide itself to block an attack if needed and with speed not imaginable.

(Dragon Rip)special slashes - A series of slashes that slice up his opponent.

(Sword Force)regain energy - Stabes the opponent and takes his strength making it his own.

(Final Technic)"Enounac" - No one has ever seen this technique's movement. It is undodgeable and life can be taken from spirit's will with its strength.


Personality: thinks he's not of good fighters but when he finds his enemys he destroys them, he also respects other characters. He is humble, yet doesn't care for others lifes unless they are helpless. He gives no help to those in need unless they are not of life. He doesn't know what his limits are in fighting and will keep on getting stronger in his mind.

Bio:
Zohik’s story begins about 18 years ago, before the war of dragons took place and when all was calm. Zohik was born atop a mountainside. His farther was called “Zanti” the warrior of dragons, his father got was the leader of the dragon squad in the Night War. It was said that he was unstoppable with the sword, but one day he was struck and he lost his thumb.
He ran to the mountains and locked on to the caves to the West Side and hid for many years, until one graceful day when a beautiful woman came adventuring threw the forest below his caves and three ferocious Drakes attacked her. Their screams echoed threw the forest and as Zanti hiked for dinner he heard the monstrous cries and bolted to where threw were. He came to a wide-open place where one drake was dashing for the woman, he jumped up and took the blow to the chest and killed the enemy with the strength of the impact. The other quickly fled and Zanti picked up his prize and started to walk. As he did the woman followed. About a hour later she asked him where they were going and he answered that he was going to his home. They sat down and talked and fell in love. They gave birth to a child called “Zohik”.
He grew up strong and he worked hard for his mother and father, doing choirs and killing dinner. What his father didn’t know was that he cut trees down and shaped them into a slick blade shape but the blade reached over the length of a normal sword and the weight would crush a normal human, but no, Zohik was different. He was the son of the great Dragon Warrior and he knew that some day he would take on the name and be greater then the Dragon spirits.
He took the carved out blade and practiced day and night to become stronger, every time he would make the carvings bigger then the last putting on more weight to master. He practiced moving like a warrior and trained to become faster then his father. He tide weights to his legs and arms as he ran around the mountain every day, he never took them off and even slept with them.
He prayed to the mighty Dragon spirits to send him a sign to tell if he was ready for the warriors that would challenge him if he left, but nothing ever came and Zohik was put down every day. Until one day years from his prayer a monstrous creature came, bigger then the mountain. It was a dragon, one unlike any of the ones from the books he had read, it’s wings went further then he would have imaged and it blew smoke from it’s nose as to say that it was ready to burst flames hotter then the center of the sun. Zohik knew that this was truly a test for him from the spirit. He knew he had to have a weapon to defeat this marvelous creature, then suddenly he felt something pull on his arm, a magical sword laid there and a voice came in his head “ Life Sword.” There was a gleaming stone wrapped around it, Odin pulled it off and put it around his neck for it seemed like the right thing to do since it looked like a necklace. It glowed brightly as he got ready to fight, then suddenly he started to flame in his eyes, and his father Zanti now watching couldn’t believe his eyes. Zohik sprouted wings covered in Diamond armor and he had armor with a substance from another world. He truly was the legendary “Warrior of Life.”
He smiled as he flew with incredible speed to the Dragon’s throat, with one mighty blow of his Life sword the monster fell and the heart of the monster went into his amulet around his neck. He landed and looked at his sword and wondered how it got to be there. He closed his eyes and his wings slowly disappeared, as did his armor. This is where he starts over.

ok so do you want me to edit the first post or are we just going to go on from there?

How about you just take off of the other post. I'll go next but I'll reply in a little while.

ooc: i'm just going to write what i think you told me to do. And if Zohik was named Odin then he was a good guy right. cuse that's what i'm putting in the battle.

ic:It was a dark and stormy night. The mountians were burning from the lightning that struck them continuesly. A dark shade passed through the shadows of a nearby village. As the people were in panic from the storm the shade was making quick work of the people. Striking right when the lightning blasted though the night sky. The crimson blood that was covering the streets wasn't noticed while the people ran in terror from the burning biuldings. The shade was the assassin Jaburo. As he slaughtered the village no one ever noticed untill only a few remained. A figure appeared in the fires. His name was Zohik. A man once known as Odin. His hair was as black as a peice of coal. His eyes were as blue as the sky untill he steped onto the battlefield. When in battle his eyes flamed like the nearby houses. He immediatly started escorting the people to a save cave. Yet he noticed the blood that covered the roads. He knew something was wrong but he couldn't afford to check it out. The remaining people were more important then to investigate the blood. for all he knew it could have been from the lightning that struck the innocent people of the village. After Zohik got everyone to the cave where they hid out the rest of the restless storm.
Jaburo had decided to allow the remaining people to live for now. He had a more pressing job to do. He had taken a contract from a rich man. as quickly made haste to take care of his target them the employer. As for the village he had assassinated. The remains had burnt to the ground and many lives were lost.
Zohik had made sure to personally escort the remaining citizens to a nearby mining camp and let the miners handle it from there. He decided to find out what else had hunted down those people. As he made his way to the village he came across Jaburo...