Termina (Zeldadude)

OoC: Hurray! My first thing in the Escapist's Haven. Anyway, I have one character and one character alone. Phos. Read it in the character list. anyone can join, but please ask first. I'll be talking about Phos in the third person.

BiC: Phos was walking on Ikana Canyon. He had business to attend to. He was heading toward the cave where a spring once was, and ghosts infested it. The ghosts told him that they could tell him more about his (assumable) father, Skoteinos. But like any information, it had to be a trade. Phos earlier found a bracelet, a bracelet with eleven beads on it. The ghosts flew by him, and they said they wanted it.

"No." Phos said, obviously not wanting to give up something he found.

"I know what you want to know." Said the poe. "And I know you need to know about this man who you think is your father." Phos needed to know about him, his assumable father. So he agreed. "Meet me at Ikana Canyon tonight, and bring that bracelet. I'll be in the spring."

So Phos did, and he was doing so now. He walked in front of the spring, and walked in.

"Give me the bracelet." The poe said. Phos walked forward, and handed it to the poe. "Yes, now those sages will pay! Ee- he he he he!"

"Tell me about Skoteinos." Phos said,

"What?"

"Skoteinos. You said you'd tell me about him."

"Oh, you mean your father. I have no idea whatsoever."

"What?! Give me the bracelet."

"No!" The poe said stubbornly, Phos threw his sword Cloudburner at the poe. The poe turned invisible. when he regained visibility, he turned to Phos and said,

"You silly little boy!" He put his hands together and created a large beam of light directly in the eyes of Phos.

"AAHH!" Phos screamed, the light went away, Phos stood stil. His face was pale. He fell backwards. He got knocked out.

OoC: Here is my character link:
http://www.zeldauniverse.net/forums/...r-aproval.html

BiC:I looked at the map that I carried with me and turned it around. I was in a Place called Termina, that I knew because found a sign that said "welcome to Termina", but where was Termina on the map? I looked at the back and screamed in anger. It stood there in red writing LOCAL map! "No point to turn around now." I thought. "I'll anyway end up being more lost than I already am." Suddenly, I heard a scream coming from the cave in front of me. I took out my sword, dashed inside and searched for my enemy. There was a boy around my age on the floor and he was surrounded by an odd looking ghost that looked nothing like the ones I knew. I knew that this would become a tough battle so I summoned my companion, the wind spirit. "Distract him while I wake the kid on the floor. The wind spirit jumped into battle and did as I told him [one of his only good traits was his obedience], while I kneeled next to the boy, took out my flask and poured the contents onto his face. he woke up gasping at the cold temperature of the water, but he regained full consciousness.

OoC: Cool, I read Icaris's page. Make sure to end your Italics with (/I) rather than (I) next time, but replacing the parentheses with brackets. ( ) <---- Parentheses [ ] <------- Brackets

BiC:

"Oh my gosh, are you- are you okay?" questioned Icaris, Phos looked extremely pale and week. He seemed like the end was nigh.

"Yeah, yeah. I'm - I'm fine." Phos muttered slowly.

"Who are you?" Icaris questioned Phos, for they were still anonymous to each other.

"It doesn't matter right now. Right now, I just need you to kill that poe and get that bracelet back."

"Kill a poe? Isn't that kind of impossible? I mean, it's already dead."

"Just cover me."

Phos saw the poe intimidating the wind spirit. The wind spirit tried to jump up and get the poe, but the poe just went higher each time. Up and down and up and down the poe went, getting so close but yet oh so far.

"Ha ha little doggie! You are oh so small!" mocked the poe.

"Hey dust-for-brains!" I yelled at the poe, trying to get his attention.

"Well, if it isn't little photophobic, eh? I'll just reflect a light and I'll kill you."

The poe cupped his hands in the direction of Phos, and a beam of light shot out. The second before it hit Phos, Phos yelled, "Now!" and made Icaris jump out. He did so, and Phos rolled to the side. The light had no affect on Icaris, it was light for pete's sake. Phos picked up his blade and the bracelet, and right before the poe knew what was going on, Phos threw Cloudburner in his direction once more, the poe faded.

"Phew." Phos muttered, Icaris became very tired, and losed his concentration. The wind spirit faded, and Icaris fell asleep.

OoC: Great post. You're quite talented at writing. I am trying to write a book, but I have intendancy of repeating words.

BiC: The next day, I woke up and found Phos leaning against a stone, looking at a bracelet. I thought I'd seen it somewhere. I stayed still for a moment and tried to recapture everything that happened the last night. I remembered the wind spirit vanishing and Phos killing the "Poe" as he called it. Then I saw the bracelet and fell asleep. I stood up and walked over to the other boy. "What's your name?" I asked. "It's Phos." he said bluntly. " and what's yours?" He asked. "Icaris. Did I do anything weird last night?" Phos stared at me confusedly and said: "You were smacking two rocks against each other as soon as the moon shone on you." I thought for a moment and then remembered that I woke up and slammed stones against each other for a few minutes, before falling asleep again. A cloud rolled away and the sun beat down on me. I let out an angry shout and clenched my fist. instantly a strong gust blew the cloud back. " How did you do that ?" Phos asked. " "I come from a place very far away where some people have the ability to control the elements." I said. I knew that I could be in danger if Sarone found out that a windfighter was spotted in Termina, but he seemed trustworthy. " Please don't tell anybody about it. I could be in grave danger if someone found out." He nodded and something told me he had experienced enough dangers to know better than to tell randomly anybody. "Where did you get that bracelet?" I asked him. " I think I saw it in a dream." "It found it on the floor." He said. I was about to ask him if I could get a closer look, when he fell unconscious. I stood up and was about to carry him into the protection of the cave, when I felt a sting on the back of my head and I fainted too.

OoC: I was planning on having our characters dangling on a pole in some sort of temple. What do u think?