looking for help (perspective)

[bitterlime]

Well I noticed that this site is full of good artists and that some of them are even that nice that they give help and constructive critism!

I'm currently trying to get used to more uncommon perspectives, and started out with this:


Well maybe it's not a that uncommon perspective at all, but I still had problems with it!:/

I think there are some things off but I somehow can't put my finger on it. Is the head to big? Should I make the perspective extreamer?

Ofcourse, you can also give me tips on everything else, not only the perspective.

Thank you very much.