Critique Central!

I don't like it. The gap of his shirt is too big and just not right. It doesn't match his neck. His neck seems unnatural and crooked. The pupils of his eyes are in a position which isn't possible; why would his right eye be in the complete corner? His nose has got a really weird texture; I can't see how someone's nose would look like that from this angle.

You can do better.

If you're going to give me a critique for the 5,000 time can you at least say something different than what you said before? XD

Yeeeaaah... DQ, that nose doesn't really fit with the face's angle. XD
Also, the upper lip seems really thick to me? At least compared with the bottom lip.

And, I agree with the comment about his eyes. They seem as if they have a different style, with the pupils/highlighting being different in both of them.

Now some critique please. : D


I wanted to do a whole Alice in Wonderland going wild, you know? Because of the new movie. :]
I don't know how to continue with it, you know?

I guess I just thought that a human nose can have a bump in the middle... and a dip where the cartelige may start to decrease around the nostrils. I'm sure I can still go back and give it a easy quick fix. As for his lips I think if I maybe lower the little... line on the top, maybe that'll help. Or just get rid of it. I'll figure it. I'll post a renewed version. x3

I wanted to do a whole Alice in Wonderland going wild, you know? Because of the new movie. :]
I don't know how to continue with it, you know?

Cool idea. However I didn't see alice though when I first looked at it...

Her left ear is lower than the right, and I think both ears need to be a little bit bigger to equate with the fact that her eyes and facial features are so large. Not huge, because then I'm sure that'd make you think of her in a clownish way, haha. Just a bit.

I think the tips of her ears should line up with the top of her eyes, so the ears are too low. Wow, i'm going crazy with the ears. But I think if those things are changed it'll look more balanced... I just found her face to be really overpowering. But, a cartoon is a cartoon and sometimes it is just the way it is.

Originally Posted by DekuQueen

I guess I just thought that a human nose can have a bump in the middle... and a dip where the cartelige may start to decrease around the nostrils. I'm sure I can still go back and give it a easy quick fix. As for his lips I think if I maybe lower the little... line on the top, maybe that'll help. Or just get rid of it. I'll figure it. I'll post a renewed version. x3



Cool idea. However I didn't see alice though when I first looked at it...

Her left ear is lower than the right, and I think both ears need to be a little bit bigger to equate with the fact that her eyes and facial features are so large. Not huge, because then I'm sure that'd make you think of her in a clownish way, haha. Just a bit.

I think the tips of her ears should line up with the top of her eyes, so the ears are too low. Wow, i'm going crazy with the ears. But I think if those things are changed it'll look more balanced... I just found her face to be really overpowering. But, a cartoon is a cartoon and sometimes it is just the way it is.

Yeah, I wasn't exactly sure how to make her look more like Alice unless I actually continue it. XD

And, I see what you mean with the ears. I'll definitely try to fix that. :]

..feeback ?

I really like that, Evanescent. Your eyes and nose are very nice, and I was impressed by the jawline. If you want advice, move the mouth down a very small amount, and center your eyebrows better (Picture where the bridge of the nose intersects them and you'll see what I mean). But it really does look good and I would be very happy with it so far.

This is what I did instead of homework: