Photoshop art...XD

Yay! Me and winter cub's art thread, most of this art work is drawn by WC and Coloured and retraced by me (i have no life, I spend 6 hours on lines...) anywho, Winter Cub has way to much talent so I had to even it out with my average photoshop colouring...It's for my game in IT...enjoy, constructive critisism please, on the colouring... (I'm slow...hehe)
The first one is of EC (Evil Chick, we couldn't think of a name...)

Bruce the Mecenary...

Sharleen: The main charater... (I used CMKY colours because thats what the printer uses, and IT SCREWED it up COMPLEATLY *cools down*
Super-tanned princess, Flats

All coloured in...

Bruce and Sharleen: There's ment to be love hearts and the swords ment to be coloured in...I ran out of time

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The lasti is of Bruce Supertaned princess, Sunburnt Prince, and Sharleen,
They are saying B: I just LOVE your TIARA
STP: Oh you
SBP: Would YOU STOP doing that
S: ...
I might have to load some up latter...running LOW on internet time...I hate dileup...stupid computer...I think it's holding a grudge against me...most will probably be finished by the time I load...Yep getting the sign...WC feal free to post any of you lovely drawings... Also I'll try and put the scans on here, I've uploaded them at school...Wahaha...

Oh and If anybody else feals like drawing a charater from my game...feal free to put it in here (I will post some of my other friendses artwork up here, and there is Loads)
you might have to click on it to veiw sharleen!
Please reveiw my colouring...I'm not to sure about it...(out of 10 maybe!?)

Oh and Bruce is MENT to be GAY (thus the girly colours and the manly name...Sharleen Falls in love with him, but he's gay, thus sharleen does EVERYTHING to CONVERT him, MWAHAHAHAHAHA) Ah and EC, She's ment to be like that, (sharleens arch nemisis) She's ment to be a total SLUT!!! Ane she will be waiting If sharleen converts bruce....

Oh and has any one heard of the magazine image FX, my friend lent it to me, so I will be back with better ones (Like no lines!!!)

Oh and here's the cover thingo, there is ment to be a lens flair and I did the shadows round the wrong way AND I forgot to colour bruces sword it and put love hearts and put in a title and my english teacher is gonna kill me if she reads this..

Scans...origonals
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And I am limited to 10 pics so meh, and now the dog's crying...

I like them, but I am confused as to why you colored Bruce..... In very girlly colors. At first glance I thought he was a she. Then I read what you wrote....... >.> Still quite good. Also, Bruce looks a bit gay and not in the happy-go-lucky way. The coloring is wonderful..... Bruce........ <.<

I like them..... But Evil Chick looks like you should be able to see her privates since I can't even see any underwear... Lol

LOL awesome. I need your photoshop skills. Evil Chick may be a slut and evil, but she looks pretty cool...

w00t! You come from Adelaide! I do too.

wow, i can draw pretty good but i cant photoshop, that's amazing! You and winter cub should start your own manga series!lol

Evil Chick one:
I like the style of her boots the best and the way you've done her hair. The colouring of the clothes is a bit average nothing spectacular, but the colouring excels with the hair. I think you might've slacked off with the clothes and skin. With proportions I think her boobs may be a bit too low and her chin a tad sharp. But with faces everyone has their own style. The Skirt seems a bit weird. But overall it's impressive

Bruce:
Boots, legs and Arms dont seem to fit well with the Chest and Torso. and the Eye's don't give the impression of a dude, and the pink cloth around his head doesn't seem to help ....But then I read he was gay lol. Once again the hair is very good but the detail in the colouring of his clothes doesnt go well with it.

Princess:
I think you kinda started to loose the plot here or this was one of the first ones that you did. Because it really isn't as impressive as the others. Some of the lines look wonky and weird. Great detail in the eyes and kinda in the hair but then when you lack to do it with the clothes again it kinda lowers brownie points.

Bruce and Sharleen:
I love the pose of Sharleen in this heh. and her facial expression is cute. Fingers and Boots on Bruce look weird, but not bad. The sword handle doesn't seem to fit the direction of the blade. Shame about the fact that you couldn't complete it. But once again Hair-Good, Clothes-Not so Good.

Groupie One:
Not the best one. The colouring is obsolete to the rest and so are the poses and details. It's just not a very good one compared to the rest. Bruces arm looks way too long. Princess looks reall old. Prince looks too striaght and the position of Sharleen is too 2D. But yer.

To sum it up
Nice work you have here, but you probably should have to work on the colouring of the clothes more.

And for the record the EC one is the best by Far.

*wipes sweat off after long critisim*

Internets almost run out of time (AGaiN) so I can't upload any more stuff...and my USB broke AGaiN!!! Anywho thankyou everone...
Riku's_girl: haha yes...he is a bit feminine...but he has a VERY manly voice, even though he is played by a girl...my friend can do THE BEST voice...I wish I could upload wavs...
Username180: Thanks...what underwear?! jk...?
Jayolorin: Cool...that's good to hear...but poor sharleen...every one likes EC (but that's what I'm aiming for w00t...Wow...Adelaide...
Zeldask8r0990: WC has already got 3 going...and I'm way to lazy
Hylian Z: YAY constructive critism, oh and just for the record...I spend about 30 seconds on clothes becasue I apsolutly hate non-shiny things...hair I spen close to 2 hours...burn...smudge...burn...smudge...dodge...sm udge... and the 4some is not finished...64 layers latter, and 45 mb...it's done...but internets going down...*cries* But Thank you so much...