(Dump) Tomato's Art

YAY! I finally got a scanner! ^_^ Happy-happy-joy-joy and the like.


The first image I'll post is one I drew about a year ago. I's a rarity in that it's one of the few pictures I've ever drawn that I haven't started hating the week after I drew it. Unfortunately, I've gotten a lot worse since then, I think...My art really has been sucking ever since I've started attempting backgrounds.


Some of the hair didn't make it past the scanning process...oh well. Feedback, please! ^_^

Wow, That's Awesome!!! Can't find anything bad about it, It's just so....perfect!

Thats a pretty good drawing you got there, Im with Link nothing is appealing wrong with it.

Good job

Excellent, magnifico, and other Italian praising words.
Same with the other two.
But in my opinion the head isn't in exact proportion to the body but every thing else is perfect on the head.

This is a really good picture that you drew. I think that if you added color though, it would look better.

Yes, yes! Excellent picture! I love your hands! There's just one problem: the head isn't proportionate. If you either made the head a bit smaller or if you made the shoulders a little longer, then it would be perfect! Also, shading works too! Are you just starting out? Because your work is good and detailed!

Thanks for your comments! ^_^
Heh, I tend to make the head too large. It happens in almost all of my work.
This next one is a bit sketchy, but I like how I did it, all the same.

That's awesome, but the girl's shadow kind-of looks like a tree.

The head on the first one seems like it may be out of preportion. It's still awsome though.

And I love the second one.

OMG TOMATOE GOT A SCANNER! =D

or rather.. evil.. tomatoe.
Anyways!

Very good attempts but I shall critique them so you have a springboard from which you can become better.
The first image:
You need to look sinto the shoulders, make them slightly broader (/wider). Look at a real anatomy image. Usually, the way I measure the sholders and upper torso to be correct is to place some of the bones in place like the collarbone especially.
I found this image: http://www.newagelondontraining.com/...lar%20Bone.jpg ( I hope the lassie in it will not be offended for using the image >.> ) I used it because her collar bones are clear.
Also, loosen up with the pencila little =) use fainter grades of pencil (H, 2H etc) to plan out the image then go through it again with a bolder pencil (HB, B) and allow your hand to make longer strokes. You'll find it instantly raises the image up a notch ^__^ (especially helpful with hair and fabric)

The second image looks beautiful. However.. everything has shadows except .. the great deku tree =p or at least the tree. It's shaded in beautifully but it hasn't got a shadow :<
Well done for starting to take on backgrounds though, they take courage and a lot of skill >.>
One thing for backgrounds, make sure you plan out everything in pers[ective lightly as you're mapping out the image. That'll allow the picture to hold together as one holistic image.
*curtseys*

Heh, whoops. ^_^; Forgot the tree shadow. Thanks for pointing that out for me, Anime_Queen! I'll have to get those pencils eventually. Need to get a new eraser, too, while I'm at it. Anyways...
http://i11.photobucket.com/albums/a1...o/Cowgirly.jpg
Eh, not as good as I wanted it to be. Not liking the hair or the lines too much.
I was in a very cowboy-esque mood. It was Western Day at school, so cowboy hats were EVERYWHERE. O_o;

These are awesome Evil Tomato! I didn't know you drew! I have just a few comments about your latest one though, the hands look a bit too large and the mouth should be just a little more to the left. Then again... this is way better than pretty much anything I've ever drawn! Great work!

ZOMG TOMATO.

I heart it with a passion. I can't find anything wrong with any of them! And yes, SanjixZoro is my new obsession.

Heh. I noticed.

Anywho, thought I'd post some tomato doodles I did. ^_^ Some of it got cut off, and a lot of them are rather sloppy and whatnot, but hopefully you'll like them anyway. I'm working on turning one of them into a sig. Tee-hee.

http://i11.photobucket.com/albums/a1...ilTomatoes.jpg
http://i11.photobucket.com/albums/a1...ommysside2.jpg

those are SOOO cool! Yay, Chibi tomatoes!!!!!!!!!!!

What a kick ass drawer, all i can say

Heh, thank you. ^_^
I love drawing evil chibi tomatoes with over-the-top expressions. I sketch them whenever I'm bored.
I'll have to scan some of my neater, more recent ones in eventually.

I actually have several I'd like to scan in, but they're either still being finished up or they're lost within the giant folder I keep drawings and sketches in.
Anywho, this is one I did over the summer. It's one of the few shaded drawings I've done, and it was made during a short-lived obsession with drawing knight-themed stuff.

I cleaned it up a bit in paint. Messy, messy edges. -_-;

Wow...

Those are great. They remind me of Detam's drawings for some reason. Anyways, keep up the great work! I can't wait to see more. You are going to post more, right?

Arg, I wish I knew how to work the scanner I have, but it confuses my little mind...

That's awesome Tomato! And those tomatoes, words can't describe their awesomeness. Lol. It's impossible to say which is my favorite, cause they're all so freakin' hilarious. Lol. ^_^

http://i11.photobucket.com/albums/a1.../Fairylady.jpg

Heh, I started this one AGES ago in my sketchbook. I didn't like the hair much, and the arms were so skinny she looked anorexic, so very recently I erased a lot of it and redrew it. Don't really have the time or patience to clean it up in paint at the moment.

This one I drew at school. I had a sort of scottish theme in mind. I'll color it in soon, hopefully. I downloaded a trial version of Painter, but I'm having trouble opening it.