sprite comic

ok heres my first sprite comic so bare with me
EDIT:i'm adding my second sprite comic also.
EDIT: I'm adding my new comics its the same comic but on 3 pages sorry

I thought they were short and lacking in point or comedy. It's like you didn't put much time, care, or thought into your work; all of those things are a necessity if you want your comics to be good. How about a background that's not a random picture, use images from the net if you can, that might yeild more desirable results. Also, try using more than one or two characters per comic. Having such limited characters is a sure sign of a n00b and no one wants to be that.

look these ARE my first comics so i am a newb a spriting so dont get all pissy cause they suck alright.

Yo, Dorfganon, he is a critic, I am a critic, do not blame us for criticising your comic, we are here to point out what you need to improve on and help you.

Now, sprites, the Tediz look 8-bit and do not go well with 16-bit sprites. Backgrounds could be worked on, no story at all, it does not seem to be JPEGED which is a good start, the characters seem to have no purpose for being there, humour could be better, spelling is good, grammer could be better and the speech bubbles need improvement, I suggest filling them with white before adding text. Frames are good but some lines look....dodgy...and need work.

Good, but not the best, work needed.

since your new we'll let you go

Dorfganon the comics wernt that good but they'll get better so keep them going

Lol MC Hammer.

If I were yoda I would use the force to get my lightsaber back, duh. Those were much better and they had substance, good job. And it's always nice to see someone making fun of MC Hammer

cool thanks for the compliments