My first sprite comic.

As the title says,this is my first sprite comic. Just post what you think about it and tell me what I can improve on.

Good, good its not the best but I've seen worse you should really add in backgrounds

I would if I knew where to make/get backrounds. Does anyone know how to get/make backrounds?

http://www.bghq.com/

You can get many backgrounds from there.

Its good just a sugestion save them as gif's, png's but never jpg's

gif's and png's have better image quality then jpgs

Heh, pretty good. I liked how it was basically what most people's thought processes would have been when they came into this thread. Not a bad effort for a start.

I'll give it three sporks out of five.

To have a good spritecomic you need to-
-Actually have people on the ground.
-Backgrounds.
-PNG format. JPEG sucks.

And now I must leave to tend to my bleeding eyes, those stupid edited Megaman sprites do bad things.

Not bad Tiger Calvin. Like the people who posted before me said, I'd put in a better background to make it more interesting to look at. I've never even attempted making sprites and don't even have a clue how you make them, so I can't offer much constructive criticism (or non-constructive criticism for that matter) other than that. Nice little joke there. I'll keep an eye on this comic. Post the next issue soon!

Heres the second sprite comic! And for the people who were asking,I added a backround. Here it is!

He he, not bad Tiger Calvin. I have one more little suggestion for you. You were good about making sure the speech bubbles that were supposed to come first were to the left of the bubbles that were going to come next, but since you can't always do that based on where your characters are positioned, I'd get in the habit of putting the first speech bubbles to be read above the next ones and so on as well as trying to keep them going from left to right. It's not essential, since you have been keeping them going left to right, but it might be something to think about. Can't wait to see the next issue! By the way, does your comic happen to have a name?

No,it does not have a name. I can't think of one at the moment. Oh,and heres the third one!

Heres my fourth sprite comic!Anything that needs improving?

Not bad for your first attempts!
They get better each time

just a question...where'd you get the halo sprites?
if it's a small sheet I would gladly extend it for you

Eh. I've seen worse. Things to improve on:

- Put the panels next to each other.
- Make better text boxes.
- The guns are pasted on the sprites. It's a better idea to put larger weapons like Shotguns a bit underneath the back arm. Instead of pasting it on the arm.
- The sprites don't move a lot. I suggest making new ones, or go the BnG Forums and try to find something.

They get better each time.

True dat. Improve on those bits and it'll get better. Trust me.

Originally Posted by No_hope_gamer

just a question...where'd you get the halo sprites?
if it's a small sheet I would gladly extend it for you

I got the sprite sheet off Google. And if you can,I would appreciate it if you could make the sheet bigger since there is only a few things on the sheet. And heres the fifth!

Aaaannnd heres the sixth! Some of the htings I needed to improve on need to be explained more such as better textboxes.

Thank you southern belle! Heres the seventh one!

First of all: Nice work!

Things to improve:

-I don't agree with putting the pictures right next to eachother. Put a black/white/combination of black and white line between the pics.
-Make sure the pics have the same width, or don't put them right above/underneath eachother. It's confusing, hard to see where a pic stops, and where the next one starts. Also, it looks smoother.
-... I find it hard to notice any other improvable things. Well done so far, I'm sure your comics will improve further.

Heres the eighth!Yet again,what needs improving or not.I used a yellow Jeep because if anyone who plays Halo 2 and stops to look at a few billboards the 'Hog is on there and it's yellow.