[Comics] Drifted Dreams.

Yeah I know the title still needs some work.
Does anyone remember this little guy here?

Well I've been thinking, he needs a really cool story. A story that leaves chills and tears. Plus it's a good way for me to improve on my drawings more. Be patient with me because I'm not the person to put out comics really fast. Forgive if I really suck at this, kinda my first time doing something like this.
Don't inspect any spectaculars from this overtime I might improve so don't have your hope ups.

First I'll give out a short brief summary; our young hero awakens in a forest only to remember he's duty, to awake a child. The child is the key to stop a great calamity that occurred in their land.

Here goes chapter one: Page one.

Spoiler:  

I was expecting more, as far as pages go.
But I'm not exactly sure what to think, YET.
I do like the lower portion of the comic. Looks good.
But I'll be patient for the next.

Next page uploaded.
Change the font to so that it's easier to read. (Thanks Hatsune for that!).
I thank Hatsune and Fallen Brave for helping me out.

I like this! Might I suggest putting speech bubbles around the speech, as opposed to boxes of text? It makes things more coherent. I'm looking forward to more!

Yes speech bubbles. Thanks for reminding me. Still need more improving promise to make the other better.

Why didn't I think of speech bubbles...

Glad I could help.
Can't wait to see the new improvement!

Page three is up~
I think I might improve a bit from the last time I uploaded.
(The black part was supposed to say Whack I have no idea why it showed up black).

I'm wondering how our tiny hero is going to savve the day?