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Old 07-26-2012, 10:22 PM
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Drifted Dreams.

Yeah I know the title still needs some work.
Does anyone remember this little guy here?

Well I've been thinking, he needs a really cool story. A story that leaves chills and tears. Plus it's a good way for me to improve on my drawings more. Be patient with me because I'm not the person to put out comics really fast. Forgive if I really suck at this, kinda my first time doing something like this.
Don't inspect any spectaculars from this overtime I might improve so don't have your hope ups.

First I'll give out a short brief summary; our young hero awakens in a forest only to remember he's duty, to awake a child. The child is the key to stop a great calamity that occurred in their land.

Here goes chapter one: Page one.
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Old 07-26-2012, 10:48 PM
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Re: Drifted Dreams.

I was expecting more, as far as pages go.
But I'm not exactly sure what to think, YET.
I do like the lower portion of the comic. Looks good.
But I'll be patient for the next.
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Old 07-28-2012, 08:41 PM
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Re: Drifted Dreams.


Next page uploaded.
Change the font to so that it's easier to read. (Thanks Hatsune for that!).
I thank Hatsune and Fallen Brave for helping me out.
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Old 07-28-2012, 08:43 PM
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Re: Drifted Dreams.

I like this! Might I suggest putting speech bubbles around the speech, as opposed to boxes of text? It makes things more coherent. I'm looking forward to more!
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Old 07-28-2012, 08:44 PM
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Yes speech bubbles. Thanks for reminding me. Still need more improving promise to make the other better.
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Old 07-30-2012, 07:27 PM
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Re: Drifted Dreams.

Why didn't I think of speech bubbles...

Glad I could help.
Can't wait to see the new improvement!
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Old 08-03-2012, 02:43 PM
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Page three is up~
I think I might improve a bit from the last time I uploaded.
(The black part was supposed to say Whack I have no idea why it showed up black).
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Old 08-03-2012, 03:09 PM
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Re: Drifted Dreams.

I'm wondering how our tiny hero is going to savve the day?
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