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Old 02-21-2004, 07:02 AM
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Art Review needed

If you have seen my artwork before you probably know I do computer art. Well here is some more of my stuff. This one is a winamp skin. It is finished but a few things need to be fixed. It has some cool animation. Some colors are not perfect. And if you are wondering about the points under the triforce, those are boomerangs. When you move the triforce the boomerangs spin in the other direction.

If you have any winamp skins youve made post them up here.

IF any thing is blurry, its because of the way it got saved.
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Old 02-22-2004, 11:45 PM
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Re: Art Review needed

I know that it ain't perfect, the whole image in itself it very very busy, with no space to give the eyes a rest.

And along with that, some of the sprites you put in have been badly cropped (unless it was on purpose..) and resized, making it look tacky.
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Old 02-23-2004, 07:53 AM
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Re: Art Review needed

Right now I have to agree with Chuc it looks very busy. After some work it could be good, though.

Try to take out the mountains on the side, or just make it a bit more organized.
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Old 02-23-2004, 01:45 PM
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Re: Art Review needed

I'm sort of working on a winamp skin. I have done a bit of skinning before. It was for NotePadPro.
[Edit] Here it is, attached.
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Old 02-23-2004, 03:55 PM
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Re: Art Review needed

i too agree with chuc. its busy. *rests eyes* keep workin on it. thats a cool idea for a skin yami... i dont think i woulda thought of "clean". its simple but very cool.
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Old 02-23-2004, 06:14 PM
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Re: Art Review needed

YAMI: Well... I could call it Clean, but it doesn't look too much like a "Clean". Looks more like it should be called "Sterile". Or "PDA". Something that would be called Clean I would think is something shiney and finished looking with curved edges like Mac would make.
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Old 02-23-2004, 10:03 PM
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Re: Art Review needed

Ok,wwww9898. I like your skin, but it is too busy. Like GoldenChaos said, you need to make it more organize.

Yami, your skin looks good and I like the color, but it is too...simple. *can't find the right word*
Anyways, both of you are doing good. Keep up the good work. ^_^
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Old 02-24-2004, 07:22 PM
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Re: Art Review needed

Here is my edited version with some very big fixups
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Old 02-24-2004, 07:35 PM
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Re: Art Review needed

I like the fixed up version a lot better! But it still looks a bit too busy.
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Old 02-24-2004, 07:40 PM
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Re: Art Review needed

do you have any comments on what I should take out or improve
Please tell me
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Old 02-24-2004, 07:49 PM
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Re: Art Review needed

Yes it looks much better than the first one.

Suggestions: take out the little blocks and things at the bottom... they look like they just crowd the screen. Also you can get rid of the enemies standing on the sidelines.... also look like they do nothing...
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Old 02-24-2004, 07:51 PM
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Re: Art Review needed

You could try taking out a few of the Links on the top, and maybe a few of the enemies above the 'winamp playlist' thing.
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Old 02-25-2004, 04:51 PM
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Re: Art Review needed

Quote:
take out the little blocks and things at the bottom
Those blocks and things are the buttons so I can't take them out

Quote:
You could try taking out a few of the Links on the top
The Links are the buttons
play, puase, stop, foward, backward, and you get the point
So I can't take them out
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Old 02-26-2004, 01:07 PM
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Re: Art Review needed

I like the updated one! Very cool looking! It doesn't look busy anymore!
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Old 02-26-2004, 08:01 PM
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Re: Art Review needed

Well now that it seems complete
I might as well post it up for download
hope you like it
And maybe I'll make some more improvements
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