PS2 Special Tupolev Forces Mark II

I knew I would get your attention with such a flashy topic name. Anyway, this is my first attempt of inking, coloring and cel-shading. Are there any mistakes or tips for improvement lying around?

That's pretty good, I like it. As far as tips, I can't help you there, I've got no talent in the area of drawing or anything like that. So, I'll leave the tips to SearanoX and others.

Good sweet Mike!! It's you Stormay!!! ^_~

Great pic, I think it's perfect. There's really nothing I can say that I don't like ^^

It's not me, I have longer hair

Ah, Storm is back from the dea- erm, that is, the army. Good to see you again.

The picture is good, and it's better than your other stuff. There are still few errors - namely, his chin should be more pointed, his skin tone should be lighter and more pink (it's too orange as of now), and his hands should be closer to his body; they look like they're bent at a somewhat strange angle. Remember, the hands hang down, they don't jut out in strange ways.

It's a good picture, though. Definetly an improvement. The next step would be to try out different facial expressions, use more shading, and perhaps attempt a more interesting pose.

I did try to get it more pink, but Photoshop didn't let me to...

And what? Other face expressions? LE NEVER!! ^_^

The arms aren't relaxed, you can see that on the hands, so they can be set in any position as I see it, but thanks a lot for the feed-back.

The hair just screams: I'll never trust that barber again XD

He does look very Neo-influenced, namely by the stance and the elaborated costume design. Just keep working.

Also, I wouldn't mind a bit of elaboration in the shadow below his feet

lol, ya. That's the new hairstyle of the future, see. And the shadow was just something I spent twently seconds on, so yeah... It ain't the prettiest

And yeah, he even got a lot of Neo's face and stubborn lack of expression. ^_^

I gtg draw machina now. Humans are too hard...

thats cool, i cant really help with suggestions, im not that good. id go what with searanox said about the shadin and stuff. i cant wait to see more.