poetry

a thread for anyone who writes/reads poetry.

...hmmmmmm.....Poetry?......I don't think that I should post them....they don't rhyme....and my friend said that they were confusing......and i don't wan't to confuse anybody......But if somebody would like me to post them........just post a message here saying that you would like to see them.....and i'll post them.....I'll say though....three of them are about love.....and only one is about life....

i want to read them expirement-01! i write poetry too.... but i dont like them, ive heard they are pretty good... but i dunno if i will post them lol. i wrote one called running in squares-i like that one, but i wont post it

you can post them here i won't take the micky.

It's ok i guess i was just waiting for somebody who would actually would LIKE to read my....almost non-poems...i just write it in the paper it looks more like a letter though...

Go ahead and post your poetry ex-01 (you don't mind if I call you that do you??) I, along with ZeonX , secondgannon, and countless others love to read poetry of any kind.
Post away.

(ZeonX please post them! I would like to see the Pros!...Like you!)
Oh well...It's not like normal poetry though...I write it like a letter...so don't laugh!....well...i won't hear you...so i guess that it's ok...well...here it goes...(the first one is from last year...the only poem that i had to do because of a hw!....all the others are just done because of how i felt)
Ps: I don't care how you call me...Experiment-01...Exp.-01....doesn't matter to me.

Life

Life is like a never ending road
to walk,you will fall
and get up many times
until you finish the road
and you will see all that you
have been walking,
what good things you found
and what horrible fates you
had,between good and bad,
life and death.
Sometimes almost finishing
the road before getting there
and giving up in life when
you were having problems.
You had good experiences,
bad and you learned a lesson.
When you finally finish the road,
you are old and your time is up!
You will find a doorat the end
of the road and when you open it
you will find another road
and another life.
(2002)
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Dreams

Love is unpredictable,
it never says when,why,
what,how,or who,
it just strikes unexpectably
in a moment,sometimes
it might or might not be
true love,sometimes it's
true or just lies,
but while it lasts,
it is a dream come true.
I do not wish to wake
up from it,for if I do,
I fear that it was all
just a dream,a dream
of my dreams.
(1/27/04)
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Common/Uncommon things

Darkness and light,
black and white,
water and oil,
love and hate,
beautiful and horrible,
life and death,
truth and lies,
future and past,
you and me...
You might be
asking yourself,what
does those things have
in common with us?
Well,let me answer.
Many things!
But from all of those,
I will say few and
only few,but important
things. They are
enemies and cannot be
mixed together sometimes,
but they are always there,
one for the other,and
cannot live if the other
does not exist,that's the
same way we are.
(1/27/04)
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Broken Dreams

From the most
pleasant dream you
had awaken me,when
you said that we
should break our love
and friendship. For
that I cry every night
remembering that day,the
day that you woke me up
from my dream. Ever
since you woke me up,from
then on I no longer
have dreams,the only
thing I have had are
nightmares. I dream
that I stand alone in
the world without you and
your love...I miss you,
if you don't come back...
I will keep having
nightmares...but if
you come back,I will
have those pleasant
dreams that I had
before back. I just hope
for the last and only dream of
mines,to come true.
(1/28/04
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The Bird in the Golden Cage

Hear,hear...
hear the bird in the
golden cage sing.
It's beautiful voice ecoes.
But unknown is what
it is saying...
Only the tone in which it is
said can be heard.
That which you see...
A normal bird inside a
golden cage that seems to be
happy,for it sings...
Is only a lie...
For the truth is hidden
inside him and his words...
Which are sealed by that
beautiful but horrible cage,
that golden cage that
everybody want's and desires...
The true meaning of those
words are the opposite of how
it is said and sounds...
The truth...The truth is
that even though
many others would like to
live like that,
rounded by luxuries...
They have the most valuable
posetion they could posibly have...
And they do not see it...
Only those like me,
birds inside those golden
cages are the only ones
who can see the truth...
Freedom....We do not
have freedom...
One of the most valuable
things in life...
Which they do poses,
but do not see...
How unfortunate that
I was not born in that free
and beautiful world...
Only in this golden prision...
Which I cannot escape from.
(2/10/04)

wow ex.-01! those are great! pro? im not a pro. ill post them later, i have to write one i actually like.

i'll put one on but it might not be very good:

find her

as i find her,
i see her wraped in fur,
how close is she?
so close i can see,

she's as close as a breath,
as far away as the ocean depths,
will she wait for me?
not that i can see,

i want her to be close,
i hope she's close,
how can i think,
when my mind sinks,
ever deeper i go,
for the knolage i know.

by SG.

hope you like it.

Great secondganon!...now it's the others turn to post theirs!*galre*...*stare at ZeonX & sadida*...waiting!

im sorry, ill post one or two here soon, but i have to write one worth posting *is over critical* very good secondgannon. do you have any more?

It doesn't matter! One never knows! what if you post one that you say that you don't like....and i like it?....It happens ZeonX!

alright, alright! ill just make one up off the top of my head right now... itll probably suck tho so i warn you...

here i sit beside you
loves light coming over me
i feel the warmth of your presence
only to vanish within thin air
now i sit without you
alone in the stillest night
the darkness deep within me
boils to the surface
you were my light, my love
my warmth, my soul
without you i am nothing.

see! told you it sucks!

I LOVE IT!!! FINALY!! I was waiting for somebody else to post something up....and sorry ZeonX....for pestering...i don't like to do that...forgive me....

haha i forgive you! you werent pestering, i just needed to muster the courage to post my ****. do you actually like it? be honest. i made it in less than a minute so its not like i worked really hard or anything.

No really i liked it alot!!! Really I did!!

OK OK, I have one... I dunno if you can call it poetry, It was a battle rap against my friend. Excuse the bad grammer.

*Beat in the background... bah bum, bah bah bum bum...*

Yo...you cant battle me b*tch, cuz you got no skill
You wouldn't have enough strength to beat me up a hill
you should get the ***** out before I kick your a**
but if you want i'll let you walk up and kiss my naked a**
You shoulda never messed wit the best
I know your stuff was written
backing down like a pu*sy whipped kitten
Smear my rhymes on your face and read them again
ill poke through your skin
with this phaze that i'm in.
I'll murder my rhymes then I'ma come back for more,
and leave you laying there dead on the floor
I can rap for hours all i need is the time
and the rhymes
but dont let me stop now everything is fine
I know you choked but i never back down,
you never see me laying my face on the ground
cuz when I get up to mike its nice
like sittng on ice
it just comes to me
i can flow like you'd never know yo...


and thats the end... it wasn't a long battle rap.
I think it's not half bad considering that i'm kinda not too good at freestyle.

lol I liked it! It's cool!!....can i print it out and say that to my friend? lol

Yeah sure do whatever you want with it, say it to your friends, I don't care...lol. But I think if your gonna do that then do it away from an adult that might think your doing something wrong.

We do this in private, just so you know (away from the b*tch teachers in my school...).