zelda

this is my version of princess zelda.... i havent finished it though... do u like it? or absolutely hate it... hopefully not...

I think that you should finish it. I really like your style and shading style. The only thing that I can really say though is that her face seems a bit off-center.

I'm going to try to explain. The top of her head, specifically the top of her hair seems to be in an oval shape. This oval shape makes it seem like her face should be facing towards the left. Then when you look at the face, she's looking straight ahead. Thus, it seems like it is off center, or off balance.

Try to correct the top (root) of her hair by making it more of a circle shape and center it above her face.

I hope I didn't sound harsh, I'm just trying to give constructive critisizm. I really like it though!
She looks very angelic, and beautiful! Keep up the nice work!! ^_^

ok thanx! i'll fix it and no u werent being too harsh .

It's nice, but like sadida said, the face is off center. Aside from that, it's great.

Um, SearanoX, I don't think I'm Kess..... I think I'm sadida....

Although I may be crazy though.... *runs off* ^_^

Whoa, sorry 'bout that.

*edits*

it's good. I wont repeat about the face being off center. You should colour it in, I think it will turn out really nice.

Originally posted by SearanoX
Whoa, sorry 'bout that.

*edits*

*whispers* Hey think about it, at least it wasn't during... you know.

XD j/k

Hey about the Zelda pic though its pretty friggen good. *nod nod* I won't critque though until I see you finish it.

i will try and finish it as soon as i have time and ill try and colour it in too, but can someone send me a good picture of princess zelda so i can see what her upper body looks lke? please?

im editing this... anyways dont worry about the picture and i've finished the picture! but i have to get my friend to scan it for me... and she might take some time but ill try and put it up as soon as i can!