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Old 09-21-2003, 03:25 PM
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Smile my pictars

yeah ive been practicing male anatomy since so many ppl cricized my old link picture. heres the result... i know, his hands too small and he looks like knives(trigun) right??
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Old 09-21-2003, 03:31 PM
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Re: my newest pictar

Wow, you've really improved since your last picture. I like it. The proportions are spot-on, but his arms/legs may be a little thick, considering they aren't that muscular. Also, the face could be improved. His cheek bone is a bit too small, and his eyes don't match up.

Compared to your other pics, though, this one is great.

7.5/10

-1 for the arms
-1 for the face
-0.5 for the clothes (they could use a few more folds, IMO)

Also, try to add things like wind to a picture. You'd be surprised how much it can add to one.
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Old 09-21-2003, 03:47 PM
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Re: my newest pictar

great!better then mine.....lol
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Old 09-21-2003, 05:31 PM
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Re: my newest pictar

That's really good, yeah it does look like Vash, waybe you should try to drawl him
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Old 09-21-2003, 06:53 PM
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Re: my newest pictar

The hair doesn't look like link and the eyes are a little off and the arms and legs are a little too thick. I didn't see your last picture so I can't compare them but this one is a lot better than I could do. I've been drawing for almost 13 years and I still can't draw a humanoid worth crap.
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Old 09-21-2003, 09:01 PM
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Re: my newest pictar

uhhm, thats not supposed to be Link...and i dont really like drawing anorexic nor really muscular ppl and its not my fault photoshop contrast adjustments messed up his eye(s)
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Old 09-22-2003, 02:26 PM
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Re: my newest pictar

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uhhm, thats not supposed to be Link...and i dont really like drawing anorexic nor really muscular ppl and its not my fault photoshop contrast adjustments messed up his eye(s)
Then why does it says you wish you had photoshop in your sig?

Anyway, its decent.

Whats a pictar...lol.
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Old 09-23-2003, 04:53 PM
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Re: my newest pictar

my old sig...forgot to change it *shrug*
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Old 09-24-2003, 12:20 AM
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Re: my newest pictar

I believe that the grip on the sword isn't very dramatic, dulling the entire weapon.

I do like the costume concept, espacially the armour.
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Old 09-24-2003, 01:47 AM
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That's pretty good kokiri. Costume concept really sticks out to me.
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Old 09-24-2003, 01:59 AM
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In a word, brillant.
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Old 09-27-2003, 04:58 PM
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Re: my newest pictar

alright, this isnt really new, but my thread goes all the way to the bottom if i dunt put something here...

Kenshin Himora battousai the Manslayer...such a nice, long name:p
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Old 09-27-2003, 05:16 PM
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Re: my newest pictar

Wow i like this one. You can clearly see the chest marks i like the hair and the clothes. Keep it up! Also i like the scar on his face!
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Old 09-27-2003, 07:19 PM
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Re: my newest pictar

That's a good pic to, ok I got it now the first one looks like a twist between Garet from golden Sun and Vash the Stampeede
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Old 09-28-2003, 05:50 PM
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Re: my newest pictar

u sure it looks like garet, mr deku buddy? *looks* i dont see it...anywho doesnt he look more like knives than vash? u know...the hair? n thanks for the comments fellow ZU'ers
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Old 09-28-2003, 05:53 PM
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Re: my newest pictar

Wow, that's really good. If you would work a bit on your bodies/proportions, then I'd invite you to the Gosu Thread.
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Old 09-28-2003, 08:04 PM
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Re: my newest pictar

Look, I'm a girl, I'm I going to have to change my name or put I'm a girl in big bold letters on my siggy:p, ne wayz, I still say it looks like Garet, and now that I think about it he does look like Knives
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Old 09-29-2003, 07:28 PM
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deku buddy:sorry its like a reflex, i like saying SIR or MISTER
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Old 09-29-2003, 07:58 PM
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Re: my newest pictar

That's okay, oh new Avvy I like, that's kewl
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