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[iEye]

Just though I'd start my own Poem thread in Art & Writting, see how I do with that sort of thing. Its called 'The Life of Satan' and show the quarrel Satan has with God. Now obviousely this is not true, and anyone who is very religious by some neggative refferences to God, because that is not true. Just an imaginary profile of Satans thoughts. So, heres my first Poem:

The Life of Satan.

Darkness is my protection,
protection from the vile infection,
known as 'Mankind'.
I'm the negative of them,
there the negative of me,
they punish me,
I punish them.
Yet thats my job,
thats my purpose,
evil is opiniated.
I do not consider myself evil,
when 'mankind' are good,
they stay with the good.
When they are bad,
they stay with the bad.
So why should God set a rule,
of what is good and bad,
why do the middle life,
who have two choices,
agree with God.
Not me.
Why?
What is there to say that Gods way,
is the good way?
They say being good,
is harder then being bad,
and if being in hell,
is harder then being in heaven,
whos to say Heaven is the good way?
Just because 'mankind' doesn't like it...
here,
doesn't mean they have to be bad,
to get out from it,
If there Gods 'bad',
then there my 'good',
which means its there good.

God is so selfish,
he never thinks of me.

I know its no soppy love poem like others have done, but thats just me! And I may do some love poems later... Anyway, I hope you like it, its simpler then it seems. Oh and I hope you likethe way its been set out!

[Ninjax]

Thats pretty damn good

[iEye]

Originally Posted by Ninjax

Thats pretty damn good and kinda katchy

Thanks! Katchy?

Hows it Katchy? Its not a song! I'll do more poems later.

[•°¤*OniLink*¤°•]

Sweet poem. I'm a poet(ish) and a poem fanatic. Well done!*pats you on the back*

[.Hog]

You sure you aren't pro? I mean seriously. You could give this to a publisher when you're older! I will say, "I did a sig and avy shop with that guy..." lol....

Great job! Keep up the amazing work!

[iEye]

Thanks for the comments. Especially my buddy ItalianLink, thanks! But no, I'm not a pro, infact - this is my first time at writting poems. Here is another poem of mine:

Love

When I saw her,
I got the dose.
The magical feeling,
of passion and desire.
The total admiriation,
of one person,
the person whos everywhere,
in your dreams,
lurking in your thoughts.
Always the centre of attention,
when she doesn't even try,
I want her,
with a red hot passion,
I ....
I....
feel for her,
I want to protect her.
But I can only get close to her,
in my thoughts,
her for real is just a dream,
reality hates me,
reality hurts.
I can never touch her...
never have her...
but I can't face the truth.
Because I can't rid of the burning sensation,
known as love.

Well theres the average love poem, that I suppose needs to be in my collection of poems. And before anyone asks, that isn't true of my life. My love life is going pretty good at the moment, I guess - nothing big though.

[.Hog]

Crap... Nice man... You have just said my feelings for this girl....

Anyways, great as always. I can't wait for the next one! ^_^

[iEye]

Originally Posted by ItalianLink

Crap... Nice man... You have just said my feelings for this girl....

Anyways, great as always. I can't wait for the next one! ^_^

CRAP?! How dare you!

Oh, and I'm glad to here my power to read minds is still working. (Yes I read your mind and expressed your thoughts through a poem)

Any ideas for a topic for the next poem, anyone?

Oh and reading your mind some more ItalianLink... you will end up going out with this 'girl'! But then, unfortunately, you will find her hidden secret... she is a man! No... actually thats not true. Faulty mind reading... sorry.