Old 07-02-2005, 08:28 PM   #1
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Unhappy Im wondering

Mods lock this if you want or whatever, but Im beginning to feel like my story sucks, I mean it seems like most everyone wants the comedy and not the action storys, and also some of the posts in my story were deleted what happened? Anyway I just thought I would say how Im kinda frustrated about it, I mean I wrote that story with everything I had, but no one will bother to respond to it, because its action and not comedy, whatever happened to the I crave action and what not, anyway if anyone will respond what do you think?
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Old 07-02-2005, 09:46 PM   #2
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They deleted posts for your story? I could understand why they deleted posts if the scenes were REALLY GRAPHIC. But if that isn't the case then I don't see why they should delete part of your story, which you probably didn't whip up overnight.

Hey, where is your story anyways? I'll be glad to read it!
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Old 07-02-2005, 11:57 PM   #3
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Well they didnt delete,my posts (the ones with a story anyway) my story is under fiction snd is called TLoZ Majora and Ganons return. Hope you like it.
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Old 07-03-2005, 12:03 AM   #4
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Sure I'll go read it. If you want I can be your ZU friend and I'll read your fanfics. Or if you don't want that, then you can just PM me the names of your fanfics. I know how you feel when it comes to people reading fanfiction and viewing my art.
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Old 07-03-2005, 02:56 PM   #5
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Unhappy

Im also a little upset because if they read it they wont reply, they must think it sucks so much that there not going to say it!! Oh well, oh and knowitall sister I'll be your ZU bud!!

Ohh... well I figured out why no one will respond...they dont like the romance/X rated part I put in... Im beggining to feel like a pervert, and Im not really one... Anyway thanks for reading my story. If you hate it please rub it in my face.... But if you like it please tell me

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Old 07-04-2005, 10:59 PM   #6
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Hey why did the mods delete my posts? anyway if you added more Ill check it out, I loved it!! *goes and looks*
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Old 07-05-2005, 05:10 PM   #7
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I havn't read your story yet, and I'm not sure if I ever will as I find reading large amounts of text on the computer screen pretty heavy on the eyes, but there is always a chance that I'll print it off and glance over it.

I do however have some advice for you when it comes to getting the comments that you're looking for. I don't know if you do this or not, but find that if you are willing to take the time to post some good, constructive comments on other peoples stories, then they in return will do the same for you. It's all about give and take I suppose.

As for posts being deleted, well that's probably because people were leaving posts which don't actually have any substance to them, in other words 'I can't wait to see your next chapter.' This is looked at as spam, and will be deleted if a mod sees it.

If you're having problems leaving constructive critisism, and from what I've read you wouldn't be the only one, then I might be able to help you. It's great that you want to tell that author that you liked their story, but you have to leave more comments. First off, think of what you liked in the story, and what you're looking forward to seeing in the next instalment. The pros are just as important as the cons when it comes to these things. Next of all, think to yourself, 'is there anything I would have improved on if I were writing this?' This can often help the author see things from a different point of view, and can help them write much better in future.

Good luck with the rest of your writing, and I hope you don't give up on it!
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