from sheikian to hylian blood the story of sheiks birth

chapter 1

impa nervously entered hyrule castle she had never been there before except with her mother who had died and passed on the sheikian traditions impa was only seventeen just a girl out of trianing.
she was there to be the nurse for the qeen who was three months pregnant.the queen was so frail that it was rumered that she wouldn't live throught child birth and this being her first child too the next heir to the throne.

impa entered the throne room and bowed to the king and queen as her mother had tought her to do."my lord my lady"she said in a monetone.
"you must be impa"the king said"your mother told us about you .you are just as beautiful as she said you were .welcome to the castle."
"thank you"she said.
"my wife will show you to youre room"the king said.
the queen rose and leg the younge sheikian out of the throne room and to a small room just across from waht looked like a childs nursery."you can stay here"the queen said"or if you want i can find you a different one"
"no'impa said"this rooms fine"
"then i'll leave you to unpack your things"the queen said as she turned to go"dinners in half an hour"
impa nodded and the queen left.impas atention turn to the window and she looked out her mind wandering back to the one she was in love with his name was sheiken.they had promised to marry and impa had promised to name her child after him.if it were a boy it would be called sheiken if a girl sheik.but impa had a sad fealing that sge would never see her beloved again.
she turned from the window and picked up a sword the last gift sheiken had given her."oh sheiken"she whispered to the sword"will we ever see each other agian?"
this quistion is yet to be answeerd.

to be continued

Hey. Well your grammar has a lot of mistakes. You have mispellings and run-on sentences, which you'll have to correct if you want people to take you more seriously. Though the story sounds really cool. It seems original for a zelda fan-fic. I hope I hear more of it.

impa entered the castle dining room a few moment later.
she was still depsessed over her thoughts but she tried to hide it by acting happy which wasn't easy.