'Zelda' Screenplay

Screenplay is here: http://qc.atspace.com/thelegendofzelda.txt

I think that there are way too many of these lately. I love the enthusiasm for a Zelda movie, but it would be impossible to make it and please even half the fans of the series. I read a little bit of this one, and it might have some potential (like any other script) but it seems like it was a little too mature in the first part (IE, Zelda getting laid). The dialouge seemed a bit, well, forced. Like the characters secretly hated eachother and didn't want them to know.

I liked the idea behind it. Some things moved a little to fast and I would have changed a few characters up (like the old disgusting lady could be comic relief). Overall it was good and it didn't pull from any of the games, I glad you didn't need any knowledge of Zelda to get the story. It seemed to be more like a fanfic than screenplay in parts but that didn't really bother me.
Good Job