Mokujin's Depressing poems and other poems

[Mokujin]

Well,I've deciding to put more of my depressing poems online and if it isn't angst
I put up something I've just thought of well I also take criticism well so tell me how my poems are so I can get better!

The True Feeling of pain
In the past I used to destroy things to let out my pain.
In the past I used to yell and scream at others to let out my pain but,
then when I played sports my pained seemed to increase
At home I was feeling neglected because I'm misunderstood
I was falling deeper and deeper into the Mask of Sadness.
I was the main victum of its' curse.I was a monster inside my heart
I realized that I must find the key of light to destroy the Mask of Sad
ness and when I do,I'll bring back my happiness.I will be joyful
once again and I'm determined to find the light.


Please read and review and I'll take criticism to make myself better!^^