Old 05-09-2005, 01:57 PM   #1
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Metroid Fanfic: Metroid: Mission T.99

ok, it's a bit long, sorry about that. i have been submitting this gradually on deviantart (www.deviantart.com) but i have decided to give it a shot here. this is Metroid Mission T.99. i think this is about 4 chapters together? but ok, it isn't finished yet.

**Galactic Federation office 7**
“Samus Aran, young lady. We have a mission for you and a great bounty if you do so.

-A huge screen came out of nowhere showing a cold and abandoned solar system-

This is solar system I.4 which means, Ice Solar system number 4. In the middle is a cold planet called Phendrana T.99. It has life forms, and another, which isn’t normal to live there. I think you already know what I mean, yes… Metroids.”

- A big silence went trough the room –

‘The only I could say was: I... thought... they were gone after defeating Metroid Prime... I mean, we already thought all the metroids were gone after the infant one, until I found and destroyed them on Tallon IV and Aether.’

“We know Miss Aran, but these are different. They adapted to their environment. Their own planet had molten lava, this one eternal ice... Their skin, or jelly, whatever you want to call it, is a lot thicker, and we fear they are even plated. We think the Space Pirates are busy again.”

‘I knew I killed Mother Brain twice at Zebes, and Meta Ridley at Tallon IV, who was their leader? And, maybe the Space Pirates aren’t guilty for this... But one thing was sure, I’ll do this mission, not only for the huge bounty, it’s my task...

**The cosmos, solar system I.4**

Logbook entry 234:
'As I moved closer to the planet, I, Samus Aran could start the Environment download. I stopped my gunship for downloading and replenishment. When I got my Gravity suit ready, the download was done.

-Environmental download sequence ended-

Planet: Phendrana T.99.
Extremely cold atmosphere, storms are rare, but there is one going around for 10 years in North-North-West zones.

Main predator: Sheegoth
Main fungus: -no info- Scanning is necessary
Main insect: Plated ice Parasites
Main plant: Heath Cactus.
Days have periods of 32 hours, of which 22 are night.
Temperatures are always below zero. Average temperatures are the following—
Night time: -60 degrees, Celsius.
Daytime: -20 Degrees, Celsius.

Great... but I had worse. I think my gravity suit can hold this.'

-End of logbook transmission-

**Phendrana T.99**

Logbook entry 235:
'As I moved closer I began to realize this was not safe. My gunship began to move around and a crack appeared on my gun ship’s visor. A large boom came from the back, and I crashed right in the snow. My visor became black, and I fell 'asleep'.
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Huh… wash?! I woke up, and barely lived. My limbs feel like they are frozen... and maybe, they are… What the hell happened? banged trough my head, and I stood up. There was a crack in my visor and luckily it didn’t let air go trough it. I would freeze immediately.
As I stood up, the only thing I could see were spikes and huge teeth... These... were Sheegoths...!!
The only thing I actually could do was, of course, try to defend myself. I tried to toggle to my plasma beam, but it malfunctioned. Actually, they all did except the ice beam and the light beam. Great... I charged my light beam and shot it at one of the group of hunters, but it didn’t work, I need my dark en plasma beam for this, it’s helpless. They were circling around me, was this a sort of hunting ritual? It didn’t matter; I got time to do a system check, download initiated.
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-Plasma beam malfunction
-Power beam malfunction
-Wave beam malfunction
-Dark beam malfunction
-Annihilator beam malfunction
-Combo’s malfunction
-Spider ball malfunction
- X-ray visor malfunction
-Dark visor malfunction
-Echoes visor malfunction
-Hack visor malfunction
-Grapple beam malfunction.
Ai, that doesn’t sound superb, luckily, I still have my missiles and Heat visor, which will come in handy. Well that’s what I thought, because after I switched to Heat visor, the biggest Sheegoth attacked me. Everything passed by like a flash of lighting and I had to make up something very quick... what didn’t malfunction? What?! Morph ball! Exactly when the Sheegoth opened his mouth, I resized and got swallowed.
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Acids...
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Ok, what to do now, what to do? I did another system check to remind me, and I still had Power bombs. I laid a power bomb, but the freezing acids already had me...’

Samus stopped typing, this was her last Log book entry so far, and she went to explore Phendrana T.99, in, her ice suit.

- Tab… Tab… Tab… Tab… Tab… -

Damn! Samus yelled, while she broke through some ice right in the freezing salt water. “These oceans are frozen!” Her suit fell down like a brick, but she managed to get a glimpse of herself in the ice above her. “Who is that…?” While she was floating down, she examined her suit, not knowing she was going down and down… “It’s… It’s white… not… yellow and blue… The deep ocean got darker and her body faded away in the darkness. She was still so amazed and startled; she didn’t know her oxygen was getting less and less. On land this isn’t any problem at all, while her system made oxygen out of the toxic environments, but in the deep ocean this is only limited leaving her to a max of 5 hours. But the thing is, she didn’t save it up since Torvus bog.

A big flow shift occurred, getting Samus’ focus like a falcon again, because this wasn’t natural…




Logbook entry 236:
The darkness, and the ominous creature surrounded me, leaving me nothing.
I toggled to heat visor, which showed pure darkness, saying there isn’t any heat at all. But then a flashing big yellow serpent passed by. I toggled to scan visor, and scanned the creature.

CREATURE: DARK SEASERPENT
This creature is heavily warm-blooded for environmental survival. No further information available. This creature seems to be made dark by a powerful source of Phazon.

No… it all makes sense now… Metroids back, dark creatures… I know…

...

NO TIME! Samus turned away locking her gun and shooting at the dark serpent. What’s the weak spot? Flashbacks, knowledge and experience shot trough Samus’ mind.

The Alpha Blog! This could be kind off similar. Samus toggled to heat visor and light beam and waited, while she was still going lower and lower, and was still losing oxygen. A yellow serpent came towards her and she gave a full fledged blow right in the eyes and mouth of the dark serpent. Bulls eye... Being blinded by the light the serpent came towards her not knowing of her presence; a perfect opportunity to let him eat some power bomb.

...

As the serpent lost his bright colour on my heat visor, I still was shimmering down in the never ending ocean. No sight, no oxygen... I thought I was dying. I was sure when the pressure finally got my suit and cracked my helmet. Just a few seconds and the blazing cold would get me... for sure... Suddenly I got pulled down in a killer whirlpool. I smashed against a rock and I everything got black.

- Cough... cough... cough –

I opened my eyes... a floor? Where’s my helmet? There it is! As she stood up and looked around she was at a sort of water drainage system; a water refreshment system? I probably got stuck in the middle and got lucky by surviving it. But there’s oxygen!? Only humans need this! O wait, I forgot, Space Pirates live of it too. But how’s my helmet though? She grabbed it, looking at a helmet without any visor at all. Damn it! All broke! No scanning any more. I have a bare situation here. No gunship, almost no weapons and systems, an unknown suit and an unknown environment. Well, looking at the past and facts, not so bad after all...

-Tab... Tab... Tab... Tab... Tab... -

“Ha ha ha! That’s a good one. By the way, I heard the bounty hunter is back? Is she going to kill us?” “No stupid you’re wrong! Look, I’ll explain there is someone that looks like... wait, I think I heard something...”

“****! I’m still a bit dizzy after the whirlpool.” Samus said to herself when she accidentally smashed against a bucket.

“I’ll go and see what it is. I’m a rookie, it’s usual I’m the dip****” When the space pirate opened the door, Samus knew that she was not in a very well position. If they get time to activate the alarm, I’m done, finito, dust, nothing. So, let me think... what to do? Too late, the door is open... Samus hid behind the door itself and waited till the Pirate was gone. No... No... Not now, please, doo.oon..’t sne-e-aaze... HATSJOE... DAMN! Why do always get the classical mistakes?! The Pirate turned around, shocked by seeing the legendary bounty hunter. Samus could lock because of no visor, but it doesn’t matter, she can’t miss this. There is he, dead, while the other was already running towards an alarm. Ok, time to use a seeker missile. Bam! Dead... Samus moved the bodies and threw them in the water drainage. Off they go, and they disappeared in the black cold ocean...

*Unknown Space pirate base*

Let’s see if there’s any technology I could steal and use. This is going to get difficult, no downloading, no scanning, and I’m more vulnerable.

Log book entry 237:
As I walked further in the base, It got darker busier and more hard to not be seen. Time to sum things up.
Known:
- Metroids back
- Dark creatures back
- Space pirates back
- Phazon’s back
Space pirates are cooperating with someone, to get money and Phazon for their own dirty projects. The person they cooperate with probably toughens up the Metroids for her army and helps the Space Pirates for her army.
Unknown:
Why?
How many?
How?
When?
And, who?
At least, I knew a few who are behind this... Just wait... Dark Samus...

“Jezus man! Ken je soms niet uitkijken, domme sukkel? Zoek je ruzie? Dat kan je godverdomme krijgen, kleine aap!”

I didn’t know what the hell those Space Pirates were dazzling about, but they started a fight, the perfect opportunity to pass them by and get to ammo storage. I really don’t why they let those douche bags guard one of the more important rooms of a base.

All my technology is from the Chozo, but the unoriginal Space Pirates are such losers to steal a lot of them. So, all their guns and beams are similar...
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