Scarborn

Ok peoples here is my follow up on the scarborn story along with the origional:

The chronicles of…
scarborn
Search of the Scarblade.

The legendary scarblade was once a star, the most beautiful and biggest star in all the galaxy. This star was the source of light and heat for a grand planet named… Sorlon. This planet was home to many a race. One day their legendary star burnt out… All was dark… The seas and air went silent… then in one outburst all went wild. Evil bellowed forth from the depths of the earth… Yet A piece of the star fell to earth and was captured by the great sword master… Scarborn. Scarborn took the star to the wizard of Garshia to enchant the star and forge it into a blade. This blade was the mightiest blade in all the galaxy. Now was the time for Scarborn to come out of hiding and destroy the darkness of the town of moryclan. But one problem was… Scarborn could not return… He was put under a spell of the powerful wizard. Scarborn was trapped in a seal of the past. The wizard took up the sword and was incased in its power. The wizard was now conceived by the dark forces of Moryclan. The evil which bellowed forth from the earth enslaved the minds of the Sorlons. Now the are trapped in a virtual world called Halothane. Halothane was once a world. Not much was known about it, but it was taken over by the evil of Moryclan and destroyed… But now the world is but an illusion trapped in the minds of the Sorlons. But one day it was prophesied that a young hero would arise and set free the Sorlons forever. That prophecy came true. A young boy named Sirulen Scalrun woke from his evil dream only to find that he was in a world not of which he knew. He remembered the tales of the forsaken and their prophecy’s but did not think he would be the chosen one. Now he is on a journey of the lost blade of Scarborn, the legendary scarblade. He will be faced with challenges of great extent to get to the evil underworld city of Moryclan, and if he finds the scarblade, he will be faced with an even greater challenge… A war, not a mortal war, but an immortal war of psychic beings and wizards from different times past. The fate of all mankind lies on his shoulder…



The chronicles of…
scarborn
The lost story of Scarborn…

Not much is known about the ill lived hero, except that he wasn’t always a hero… I have come to tell the tail of our lost hero, so listen closely for I will only tell you once of the long sought tale of Scarborn… Scarborn was a normal average every day Sorlon. He was a mighty warrior and very skilled with a sword. His skills were coveted by many a race and many sought to gain his mortal power, yet could not seem to capture it. Long before the fall of Sorlon the planet of Halothane was under attack by a hidden race not heard of for a long 20,000 years. Yet they came back more powerful than ever. Scarborn was called by the elders of Halothane to help aid them in the fight. Scarborn went and fought a long and hard battle and slayed many of the race of Moryclan in this long fight, yet could not save the whole world of Halothane. He was slayed by the champion demon… Or so it was thought… Scarborn was captured and taken to the stronghold of Moryclan and was put under the influence of a viral poison designed to capture the victims soul and use that persons power and skill, along with the persons body, for their own purposes. So Scarborn could not control his own actions and was not aware of what he was doing but was only aware of light and dark. After 10 long years of working his duty he was sent to an unknown planet of which he was assigned to kill all he could there. While walking in a forest he stumbled over a hole and fell into a river which tossed him over a giant waterfall. There all went dark and he would have drowned if it wasn’t for a woman named Zelda Foulen who took him out of the water and pulled him to shore. The waters of the place of which he almost drowned were said to having healing forces which could heal even the darkest soul. Zelda took Scarborn to her house and nursed him for 3 weeks and 2 days till he woke up. Immediately he fell in love with her and they got married. Soon after she bore a child which they called Sirulen. Sirulen was a very energetic boy who never settled down and wanted to always be at his father’s side. Soon after a force of evil was sent after Scarborn to slaughter him, for he had found out about his past. They found his house and went to slay them but Scarborn being a magnificent fighter held back the demons allowing his wife and child some time to escape to the world of Sorlon. Yet they were captured. Scarborn went to Sorlon to wait for his wife and child, but after 2 weeks of waiting he thought they were slain, he went into hiding as not to cause trouble for anybody else. And has remained there for some time until the star fell and he was captured by the wizard. Now it is up to his son, which he thought was dead, to save him and find the sword of his father and destroy the evil before it destroys them and the worlds of many races…


So there it is tell me what u think.