The Links Awakening Storyline

Well, after reading the news on the ZU site, I thought i would give it a try and see if i am up for the job to write the Storyline of the game, for those who have not played the game. It is far from finished, because i want it to be as detailed as possible. What do you think?

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The Legend of Zelda: Link’s Awakening

Introduction

After heading home from another adventure, Link was looking forward to going back to Hyrule. He learned a lot of new things on his latest journey, and felt ready to defend Hyrule from whatever evil awaited him. Yet Link was not getting back any time soon. While on his boat, his ship gets caught in a thunderstorm, and his ship is damaged heavily by this.

Link tries to keep the boat in one piece, but it was not enough. A giant strike of lightning hits the boat, and at that moment Link loses conciounseness in the cold darkness of the sea. Then, Link heard a familiar voice, that reminded him of home! It was Princess Zelda!

"You're going to be alright!" the voice said. "What a relief!"

Link opens his eyes and finds out that the voice came from a girl named Marin, yet looked familiar to Zelda. The girl explains that she found Link on the beach, together with some remains of your ship, and that you were in a terrible state. Conluding, she took you to her home and took care of Link. The island that Link was on was called Koholint Island, and on the top of the highest mountain of the Island, there was a Giant Egg.

With too many questions, and hardly any awnsers in his head, Link goes out to find his gear. Before he reaches the door, the girl’s Father stops him. His name is Tarin, and he gives Link his Shield back, because his name was engraved in it. After that, Link goes out the door and finds himself in a Village. He heard that the beach where he was found was located south, so off he went, on a new adventure!

Chapter one: Retreiving your Sword, Owl Talk.

(chapter not written yet, will do so today)

Chapter Two: Magic Powder, Yoshi, and the key to Dungeon one!

Link heads back to the village, now armed with his own valuable Sword. He decides to wait with going to the woods, first he wants to explore the Village a bit.

Link finds a nice looking Shop and Minigame place. Having not enough money for any of the items in the Shop, he tries out the game. It is a grappling game, and Link immediately knows how to handle it. First he catches another 30 rupees with it, then he uses those, to receive Magic Powder. Link is told to sprinkle in on many things. Finally Link uses the remaining Rupees, to catch a Yoshi doll.

Wondering around in town a bit more, he comes to a house with 2 people in it. One is a woman holding her child in her arms

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As you see im also putting in the Trading Sequence. Hope thats ok.

'snot bad, but could be better. Less of the "Link did this, Link did that" in the first part.

Shouldn't you be sending the application to Lars directly rather than posting it? I would, except I don't know enough of the storylines.

i know but i will take like weeks to finish a full detailed storyline of each game...but i might send a sample...once i made this look better..thanks for the crit ^^