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The Hero of Time
The Hero of Time
Shields shall shatter, Swords shall break. Darkness comes, The earth will shake. But there's one last hope, As a hero awakes. The hero of time, For all our sakes. 
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Re: The Hero of Time
The first two lines aren't made by you, and the rest is quite bland. A few spelling errors as well. That, and I don't believe the new game to feature the hero of time.
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03-20-2005, 06:20 AM
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Re: The Hero of Time
It's quite short, but it's a nice rhyme. If the new game featured the Hero of Time than it would most likely create a time paradox of some sort. So, I'm going to take it that this is refering to OoT or MM.
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Re: The Hero of Time
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Re: The Hero of Time
I didn't really like it, it didn't really seem like it flowed or had a good rhythm. And did I miss something, it titled "Hero of Time" but you said it was the TWW Link that doesn't make sense. Oh well, keep trying, if you keep writing them I'll keep reading them.
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Re: The Hero of Time
I Judge it for like 6/10 Keep it up.
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03-31-2005, 10:08 AM
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Re: The Hero of Time
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Re: The Hero of Time
I didn't really lke it either.
By the way WHY HAVE YOU GOT MY NAME UNDERNEATH YOUR SIG!
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04-07-2005, 12:48 PM
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Re: The Hero of Time
Whoa chill dude, anyway poetry is very complex and requires a lot of elaborate and passionate ideas in order for to appeal to an audience. A poem is similar to a story but they are both very different, some poems use the references of "rhyming" words while others dont. Its hard I understand and this is not bad for your first try, but more thinking is involved and also a creative mind, you cant possibly write a poem if your not creative or base it on a certain situation or matter. I have attempted poetry numerous times and its been difficult but these are just notes for the future if you plan on writing more, good luck and well done
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