Zelda Sprite comic

Hey guys! Okay, hopefully the attachments worked. This is my first time using sprites, so go easy. I will continue these comics, and make Link actually, umm...out of his bed in the next ones. hope you enjoy the feeble first one, however!

They definatley need work, but I am sure you will gradually improve. I dont really like the text or thext boxes and maybe you could make the background more detailed than just a brown back ground. Keep working on it.

Yea, sorry about that. The background is boring, but the future ones will have the backgrounds from the game, so no need to worry. oh, and im trying to fix how crappy link and the bed look, cuz something got totally screwed when i moved it around....ill fill in the gaps. sorry about that.

No problem it was your first try so I can understand. I could never do something like that.

Okay, this one has a real background, and i think everything is better now. This starts out the "storyline" heh. Should be interesting. Hope you enjoy!

come on guys, please respond to this! I need feedback!

I like. I have a question How did you upload the comic? I've been trying to post my for along time now.

It's quite simple, although it took me a while to figure out how, too. When your posting, go down to Manage Attachments. Click the UPLOAD button, and select your JPG file. Make sure it is a JPG file!!! otherwise it wont work. Then, press okay, and once it's uploaded, go out of the window, and post! Simple as that. Thanks for the review. Ill make numero three up soon.

Nah, it can be any type of file. PNG is the best, you will find. It has a small size and high quality. And you could always upload it to photobucket or some other hosting site so that you can post it multiple places.

They look so-so. They could use some work, but they're certainly not the worst.

First, is the sprite size. When you use sprites, resize them all by the same whole number. In this case, I would recommend resizing them at 200%. this is highly noticable in how small Link is compared to the darknuts, moblins and octoroks.

Second, as I said, PNG will keep your file the way you made it, and won't have any blurs or anything. Link's sprite looks a little blurred, and so does the tree. So, when you go to save it, click the arrow next to where it says "Save as type" and select .png

Third, the text boxes. They look good, but it might be easier to distinguish them if they were a different color from the background. In most cases, white looks best anyway. Also, the borders are a little large. So try writing the text in a blank area, them putting a border around it and moving it up onto the comic.

Other than that, it looks pretty nice.

Well, actually zero, i tried to upload it as png. file first, but it said that the file was too big for the filetype. so i changed it to jpg. and it worked. maybe ill try the png. file again, tho. thanks for the advice. ill make use of it.

Here we go with number three! png. file. hope u enjoy!

Nice comics, they really improved from the first one. I do alot of drawn ones at home but I have not yet decided to put up with doing them on the computer.

Your work is improving Bloodsword. I told you all you needed was experience. Nice job, keep improving and I look forward to your future work.

I enjoy these comics keep it up so I have something to do

They're all funny, and all but the first one look fine. I have one bit of advice though: Get rid of all the extra white space!

I really think you should get good backgrounds cause then it would be perfect.Here is my zelda spritecomic

Hey guys...im sorry i havent updated these comics in so long. im posting this now to tell you DONT FORGET!! MY ZELDA COMICS WILL LIVE!!!!! keep waiting! theyll be there.

Woohoo! finally, its out! Link comics FOUR! Its the longest yet. Enjoy!