Silly, little, terrible poem... :-P

In English we're learning about poetry, and I was inspired to write a poem. I love writing them, but unfortunatly I have yet to write a serious one. I guess I'm just not... depressed enough. I did this one just to see how many rhymes I could think up, but I eventually ended my little experiment with a true statement ^_~. It's not my best, not profound, feel free to get me all the negative feedback you can think of. It needs a little revision, but this is the basic poem:

Radly~

Radly is a vile fellow
His mismatched teeth are rotten yellow

And look as though they belong
To a thousand animals, misplaced terribly wrong

His breath is a stew with unimaginable power
One quick wiff could melt a flower

His bony face holds unpleasen tiny white eyes
His shiny scales are as black as midnight skies

Each limb seems to bear an extra joint
He has spikes and tendrils with no apparent point

His piercing voice is a wretched crow
And his demenor? You don't want to know

You may call him morally debased
But in doing so, you'll promptly be de-faced

His body's of an unconprehisible size
Getting out of his way would be terribly wise

Each finger sports a slender knife
Quite famously known for taking life

If you obstruct his path, he won't hesitate to use those claws
Radly makes up his own laws

He's a monster, can't differenciate right and wrong
But tell him that and you won't last long

He's so evil he trails blood where ever he chooses to go
Radly: he's so many people I know

Radly? well if you say so - was funny, I liked it.

Originally Posted by achitka

Radly? well if you say so - was funny, I liked it.

Funny. Yes. It disgusts me that I thought it was funny, considering the content (a slender knife known for taking life...).

Yeah, so I can laugh at death.

It's not...bad... just not Edgar Allen Poe.