Alternative To Life (Comic)

Hi
Recently I've been working on a comic with me and Uno
I've gone through about four different versions of the comic, and this would be my fifth attempt. But, this would be the only time that I've actually posted anything about them on ZU.
The last four bombed out big time, and two of which bombed out before it even managed its way onto my hard drive ^_^;; Mainly for lack of knowledge on my part

But anyway, I thought I should post them here so I can get some response from others

So, without further ado, Alternative To Life

ATL 01:



ATL 02:



ATL 03:
Just to let you know, this is the first one where i did some highlighting, where as the first two only have shading



And lastly, the preview of comic 4



Heh, due to lack of text on the preview, no one other than a handful of people know whats happening, but I'm sure you can get the jist of it

Anyway, hope you enjoy, and be honest with your comments

Ummm I'd like to say two things my friend. First, your first four alternative pictures have a broken link (aka: they don't work/we can't see them), and the second thing is: from the looks of the fourth picture, your comic looks cool.

-BGS

edit: For some reason, I can see the pictures now...and they all look awesome!

AWESOME! Even though I have already seen them all... Oh, and I star in it

They're better than the older ones I've seen from you. Just clean up the art a little, keep some consistent proportions (try drawing it bigger and shrinking it down in size), and you may have something there that I'd willingly read.

Thanks for the comments everyone ^_^
Sorry it took a bit longer than I had hoped to reply, but all sorts of different things and such ^_^;;

Just recently did another sketch for a character in the future comics, but I'm not giving any other information than his name is Vamp. I'm sure everyone can make the assumption of what he is from that

http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v3...ampPreview.png

Although I'm not sure if this is even looked at anymore, just thought I'd post something new anyway

Here is a finished (slightly) version of Vamp's main form for the comic.
Basically, Vamp is a vampire mercenary who doesn't have the weaknesses of any normal vampire, e.g. daylight, garlic, crosses etc..

Anyway, without further delay... Vamp

Nice Sav. Awaiting me now =D

Gah, double posting >.>

I havent seen the last pic before o.o well, its cool looking...

Heh, I guess should be kind to you Yami
I haven't done what you fully requsted of me before, but it's a good start if I do say so myself

This is just a quick sketch I did when I got bored of playing videogames continuously over the past few days. Although it doesn't fully show your character, and granted it is a rough sketch, you get the idea.



Also, just for the sake of it, I might aswell put up a few other sketches that I'm proud of :cool:



Well, I guess that's it for now.

P.S. Sorry for the double post ^_^;;
Oh, and also, just take no notice of the weird arm thing on the first sketch. Just something that I did whilst not paying attention

One of the boobs on the second sketch is smaller than the other, just like to point that out :3

you obviously haven't taken health class yet . The picutres are great, the comic has been interesting so far but the third one threw me off a bit. Looking forward to the next ones.

Hey everyone, back again and with a new sketch :cool:



I know that I've strayed away from posting the actual comics, Alternative To Life, and that is kinda annoying, seeing as how I made this thread BASED upon the comics, but, I plan to work very hard to get the next few finished.
Don't blame me though, blame Final Fantasy XI, it's addictive >_>