Poetry

Well sort of.
no title couldn't think of one at the time.
Still cant.



Ere winter's solstice began
relations lost
remembered pain
gone
the promise
of one day to return
journey into time's murky fold
condemned to hell by one command
darkness pierced with light
sent by true love's hand
shining above all
needs reflected
a life
completed
will free the memory
bound by departed hope
to protect the future
rescue expectation
pass the test
of loss,
grief,
and sacrifice
returning to life
a thought
lost
by magic
bindings are broken
bringing back to light
one wish forgotten
to surrender
joy,
the gull and
speed the ravens flight
whispered once to kindle hope
from childlike hands
it is granted
as spoken
anon.

I like it!!!!! Who's the true love?? :cool:

It's actually a prophecy I wrote as part of my fic; Nagori, Saimon and Senkyoku. Kind of the whole fic in short poetry form.

I like it. It's got a nice flow to it, and when it's centered, it has a weird swiggle effect to it..

Good job

I like it. It's got a nice flow to it, and when it's centered, it has a weird swiggle effect to it..

wow, you noticed that, I wasn't sure I had managed it, thanks you guys.

Originally Posted by achitka

Well sort of.
no title couldn't think of one at the time.
Still cant.



Ere winter's solstice began
relations lost
remembered pain
gone
the promise
of one day to return
journey into time's murky fold
condemned to hell by one command
darkness pierced with light
sent by true love's hand
shining above all
needs reflected
a life
completed
will free the memory
bound by departed hope
to protect the future
rescue expectation
pass the test
of loss,
grief,
and sacrifice
returning to life
a thought
lost
by magic
bindings are broken
bringing back to light
one wish forgotten
to surrender
joy,
the gull and
speed the ravens flight
whispered once to kindle hope
from childlike hands
it is granted
as spoken
anon.

i like it its great i know no one personally that can right like that

The meter suits the purpose wonderfully.

Title: Price of a Promise?